Author : booklored

Reviewer : anonymousnew00

• COVER : 8/10

The cover is simple and suitable, but I think it has scope to be more intriguing.

• TITLE : 10/10

I don't think I need to judge the title, because the reader could understand the connection between title and story after reading the blurb. Honestly, I didn't expect that Wilder is the name of the protagonist. It's a short, simple and unique title.

• BLURB : 9/10

The blurb is eye-catching and intriguing, and gives the right amount of information.

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

I love reading romance and teen fiction, and honestly, the concept is not something really new, but it is surely different. I liked how Wilder back-answered whenever anyone tried to put him down.

• CHARACTERS : 9/10

I loved the introduction of the characters. You have a good balance between their thoughts and dialogues. And their emotions are described beautifully. I can feel what they are going through. But, I think you should add more information about how Nico and other characters look.

• PLOT : 14/15

The story is interesting so far. All the events of the story are well planned. At one time I feel like it's going at a fast pace and at other times it feels like no it's necessary. In the first chapter, I think you can describe more about Nico's thoughts to his first kiss. The ending of the 1st chapter was intriguing and I can see Big Brother's protective instinct in Nico, but I really didn't expect what happened in the 2nd chapter. Kailey felt like an insensitive and too extreme person sometimes. But we all know that no one is perfect, and I really liked how you showed it.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

I didn't find any grammatical mistakes in the book. The narration, dialogues, description, sentence structure, punctuation, everything was just perfect.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

You really took the effort to answer all the comments.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

Beautiful Story! I absolutely enjoyed reading it! A highly recommended story. I will complete reading this, once I have time.

• TOTAL : 94/100

Personally, I liked reading your story a lot! If in case you have any doubt regarding the review, please feel free to ask me and I'll reply to you asap.