Author : Birdsongfuzz

Reviewer : iamafreshavacado

• Cover : 8.5/10

I like it a lot. It really suits the title but there could be a little bit more mystery surrounding it.

• Title : 10/10

Your title is amazing. It fits well with what I've read so far. Great job at this part.

• Blurb : 10/10

I love it. The first sentence to me is genius. It's really engrossing and catchy.

• Creativity : 9/10

From just reading the prologue I fell in love with your writing style it's really enticing and unique. There are still some tiny parts you could improve but otherwise it's amazing.

• Plot : 14.5/15

The plot is excellent.It was solid. No confusing twist or turns.Its Amazing.

• Characters : 10/10

From what I've read so far.I absolutely love them. I love Stacy and Lisa's friendship. they're so supportive of each other.

• Grammar : 14/15

I didn't really see any major errors. Great job!

• Communication : 4.5/5

You have a lot of comments and you replied to as many as you could.

• Overall impression : 15/15

Your story is amazing. It's really interesting. You did a really good job!!

• Total : 95.5/100