Author : questint

Reviewer : Simasye_Maulidi

• COVER : 7/10

Your cover is great. Easy to read, however, it doesn't spark curiosity in my eyes, or a want to read your story. The bird and the branches? I don't think it gives anyone a visual interpretation of your story, if I were to read the story more maybe I'd understand, but the cover fails to give me an idea of what's in the story. Try to capture that in your story. I noticed that one of your chapters showcases two covers. The first one was better. The one with the bloodstained hand of a girls. That cover really justifies your work. The cover should only be as good as the book!

• TITLE : 9/10

The title is perfect. I did expect it to be written in first person but you showcased your talents, extremely well. I felt like I was in Tressi's shoes. Key factors about her were outlined and I believe that's important when writing a story that's based on someone's life.

• BLURB : 10/10

If I could score higher? I would! Your summary is impeccable! It drives the readers with curiosity. All the imaginable questions popped into my mind. You were able to achieve this by asking questions that engaged me and your ability to give insights on Tressi's life already got me thinking. What really drove her away? Great work! It's important to have your readers excited from the start! Keep it up!

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

You managed to create such an amazing story and you complimented it by creating a great setting. Your descriptions and diversity of characters go hand in hand. You also managed to give your readers a picture of what everything is like. Keep it up.

• PLOT : 13/15

Your plot is great! I like the story line and how everything fell together throughout the journey. Although, I believe it was Chapter 4/5 where she was questioning her mother about what really happened to her sister. I thought to myself if this was declared a murder, doesn't it mean they already know who killed her? And how she died. I failed to understand that part or does Tressi not trust the judgment of the police force? Because,an accusation can't just be made. A lot of factors have to be considered. Or it just Tressi's hate for her mother, that drove her want to know more? It would be great if you made it clear.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

Character development was great. With the chapters that I've read, you managed to tell us who the important characters are and you described them well when the time came. Good work on that!

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

I found nothing wrong with your grammar. Though there was one tiny part, which you'll find in the in line comments which I believe was just over looked when revising. So just edit that part. That was the only thing I found, nevertheless your writing was clear.

• COMMUNICATION : 1/5

There's literally no communication with your readers! Try to reply or show courtesy to your readers. This makes your readers feel appreciated.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 10/15

You're writing is beyond excellent! Your punctuations, descriptions and plot are great! Your work is amazing, it was so easy to read and it felt like I was in the story. Getting to know her life almost through her eyes. However, the book cover did not strike me. Try to take note of what I've asked you to work on and your work will be even better than it already is. Keep up the good work and I wish all the best in your writing ventures!

• TOTAL : 85/100

I enjoyed reading your story! If you've got any questions. Feel free to pm me.