Author : udehlilian

Reviewer : srabonyislam

⚫ COVER : 8/10

The cover is nice but, it's not fully relevant to the story. It's a story of skinny girl. You can use something more relevant to the storyline or the main character

⚫ TITLE : 10/10

Title is perfect for the story. I love the titel. It's absolutely perfect.

⚫ BLURB : 10/10

Just like the title, I love the blurb. It's interesting as well as attractive. It's perfect for the story.

⚫ CREATIVITY : 10/10

The story was creative, it was inspirational and I loved it. Being skinny and being teased for that's really hurt. It happens in real life. And the way story turn out. I definitely loved it. Keep it up!

⚫ PLOT : 14/15

As I say before, Story was interesting and realistic. It was actually inspirational. Also nicely arranged.

⚫ CHARACTERS : 7/10

Characters in the story was really good. But, need more description.

⚫ GRAMMAR : 8/15

There were a lot of grammar issues. Which need to be correct. Author need to be focused on grammar. I didn't find any spelling mistake. Try to use better vocabularies.

⚫ COMMUNICATION : 5/5

Replied every comments.

⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

I love the the story, it's realistic and inspirational. I really did enjoyed each plot. There were some errors, I mentioned earlier need be correct.

⚫ TOTAL : 85/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.