Author : starshades

Reviewer : belkisaris

• COVER : 10/10

I love the cover. The person who did it for you did in fact an outstanding job! It is unique, eye-catching and intriguing.

• TITLE : 10/10

I didn't even check on Wattpad to see if your title has been used elsewhere in Wattpad, by the look of it, I was pretty certain your title is unique, and is not only unique but it draws attention to your story, something that's not easy to do.

• BLURB : 10/10

I love that in the blurb you put the definition of basorexia in the form of a dialogue just by that sentence alone I was eager to click and find out about the story. Skilled job. I could see just like the title and the cover that this would be a unique story.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I know I am the only weirdo that doesn't know one direction and Harry Styles other than outside of Wattpad. Many people have done Harry styles fanfiction and without knowing the band I was sick of it. But act one got me in a trance because of the sentences with gifts and it took away the bias I had for Harry Styles and not only that usually the fan fictions about Harry Styles has the same pattern but yours is unique and it kept me guessing every step of the way. Outstanding job.

• PLOT : 15/15

Just like I said with creativity your plot is unique from any other Harry Styles fanfictions I have seen out there, you made me a fan of your plot and I will definitely continue to read as I want to see if the story will have a happy ending in the end or it will be a tragic ending.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

Although the characters are actual people, you put your own spin to them, and not only that, you develop them perfectly and make them your own. Expert job!

• GRAMMAR : 10/15

Although grammar was perfect and looks like on edit, you did an amazing job. Description needs a bit of work. Everything was mostly dialogues, and when I started reading the first chapter it seems like it was a continued conversation from another chapter where the reader was supposed to know what's going on. I would suggest reading the chapters thinking you are a brand new reader that doesn't know what the story is about and think of something you would like to know about the story and put it on the chapter as an introduction of the story, but other than that. I can see your story going places.

• COMMUNICATION : 1/5

I didn't see any reply from you at all when there were comments. It might be just one loyal reader but you want to let them know in the comments that you read their comments and appreciated it, it would keep the reader coming back and feeling appreciated. Leaving the author's notes like you did is a brilliant way to create a bond with your readers.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

I do hope that you find my notes helpful and work on them as I said before I love the story and I am looking forward to reading till the end and seeing how this amazing story ends. Keep on writing and maintain the expert job of what you're doing so far with the story.

• TOTAL : 91/100