Author : thejadelover

Reviewer : srabonyislam

⚫ COVER : 5/10

Cover is nice but, It doesn't go with the title and story plot. I think it will be better, if you change it also the font can be change. It's difficult to understand what's written on the cover it's too much blurry.

⚫ TITLE : 10/10

Story title goes perfect with the story.

⚫ BLURB : 5/10

The blurb, it's described in two lines. Which wasn't that much interesting. Also you used a word 'unture', I'm sorry but, there is no word called untrue. I will suggest you to describe a little more in blurb also try to use better words.

⚫ CREATIVITY : 5/10

Story is nice but, it wasn't creative. I found it common story. There is lots of this kind of story. Also the you describe all scenario, it can be better.

⚫ PLOT : 10/15

Plots were nice but, all plots were too short. It feel like, story is ended before reading. I think Author should edit the book and add some more twist and plots in story. Try to.make chapters medium. Also use line breaks in conversation. The way you write conversation it's little confusing. Also you can add some emotions
Example : In chapter two you wrote,

"Ughh!! You are acting as if you don't know anything." Sidd said. "What do I do not know?" Avneet asked.

You can write like this,

"Ugghh!! You are acting as if you don't know anything." Said Sid furiously

"What I don't know?" Asked Avneet in confusion.

⚫ CHARACTERS : 7/10

I didn't found much characters in your story. I think if you add more information about all characters, it will be good.

⚫ GRAMMAR : 12/15

There were some grammatical mistakes and spelling mistakes which need to be correct.

⚫ COMMUNICATION : 5/5

Replied to all the comments.

⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15

I enjoyed reading the story. But, there are some points and scenario which need more description for better understanding. I will suggest you to edit your book and add some more description.

⚫ TOTAL : 70/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.