Achievements
1. Bultaoreune Awards
2. ~El Libro Award Show~ (2021 )
2nd PLACE - I ORDERED ONE GROOM
Judge: Avril_young06
BOOK TITLE [5]: 3/5
BOOK COVER [5]: 4/5
DESCRIPTION [10]: 8/10
PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) [5]: 3/5
PLOT [20]: 17.5/20
CHAPTERS & FLOW [15]: 12/15
EMOTIONS [10]: 7.5/10
GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY [15]: 12/15
CREATIONS [5]: 4/5DIALOGUE [5]: 3.5/5
OVERALL [5]: 3.5/5TOTAL= 78/100
Review: An amazingly written book by the author, I really enjoyed it! Although I can not say much as the book has only started recently, I must say, I loved your extensive use of vocabulary! There was also a good use of description, and it really got me into the book. I liked your description as well, it sort of gave me a taste of what I was getting into. There was just something about the plot, that just attracted me, I feel like I relate to the plot (even though I'm at noage to marry but you get the idea TvT) but yes, this Is a really good book. What I did feel though, was maybe you could give sort of a glimpse on how and why Jimin is like this like you gave for Jungkook where you talked about why he became a doctor? Maybe that could help the readers relate more with Jimin. And, just another suggestion, maybe, from time to time, you could go ahead and edit the work as I did notice a few writing and grammar errors here and there, Editing your work might improve the reader's experience. Other than that, great book! I really enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters! All the best!
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