Hey peeps!! Aagya apun wapas!
Jhelo!😁
And guyz me na intro points me likhne wali thi but me dialogues likh bethi 😅 aur wo kisi bhi angle se intro nhi lag rha! Aapko Jo smjhna h smjhlo😂

(Mo - Monami
Ks - Karan)

Some important points:
• In the picnic, Karan noticed Monami wasn't wearing the same necklace with her name on it which she wore. She was wearing another, it seemed new.

• Sab picnic me hai.. Koel ko nik ne pehle hi mana liya tha so wo already aagyi thi so no scene of her and Pooja with those mannerless creatures😒
• Monami ko ice cream khane ka mann tha nd she persuaded others also.. so Sid and Bala were going to buy ice creams for all.

Mo: (Sid ko side me le jaakar, whispering) Sid sun na aaj chocolate nhi butterscotch laiyo mere liye.. aur ye xyz company ka pen bhi le aayio please. You know na me kyo manga rhi hu... Aj picnic ki bhagdaud ki wajah se me kuchh la nhi payi.. Tu dekhiyo agar xyz company ka na mi..

Sid: (interrupting her) Na mile to abc company ka le aaunga. Gift wrap karake. Okay? (in a polite yet teasing tone)
Monami smiled and nodded while chuckling.

Sid: Ayy Moti Billi! Ye daat phadke hasne band kar ab okay nd yaad hai na?

Mo: kya?

Sid: (dramatically) 'Monu, I hate tears!'
Monu playfully hit his shoulder while laughing.💙

Shaitan ka Sala (oops! BALA): (while coming towards them) chalein Sid bhaiji? Mene sabse pucch liya hai ki kise konsa filavour ki ice cream chahiye. Wese Doctor Madam, aapko to chocolates bhot pasanad hai na to aapke liye chocolate filavour wali ice cream lani hogi hai na?

Mo: (smiling) Nhi Bala! Bhale hi mujhe chocolates pasand h but butterscotch bhi acha hai.. Aaj me butterscotch ice cream khaungi. Wese wo filavour nhi flavour hota h...

Bala: Are Doctor Madam spelling chodo filings par dhyan do! Aapko samajh aaya na kafi hai! 😆
Monami laughed wholeheartedly. Sid was adoring his two cute kameene dost with a wide smile😊

Sid: Ab agar tum dono ki 'filings' ka aadan prad.. parda.. whatever hogya ho to chale BalaG bro?

Mo: Sid 'Aadan pradaan'! Aur tujhe ITNI BHARI Hindi Kahan se aagyi? (with wide eyes😝)

Sid: Are bro wo Sanj...

Bala: (interrupting) Miss. Todfod Zindabad! Bye Doctor Madam!
Saying this he ran Inge punge😂

Sid: Abey Bala ruk!
He also ran behind him leaving Monami laughing.

(Yar mene socha intro yehi rokdu already mene itna lamba kar diya but thodu sa aur hai😅)

After two minutes we see Sid caught hold of Bala and Bala apologizing to Sid. Hehe. Everyone was laughing seeing these two idiots but Chitra ko bada maza aa rha tha😜

Sanju: (coming towards them) Je ka chal raho h yahan? Aur tum dono to ice cream lene ja raho the na?

Bala: Are Miss Tod... Sid pinched him
Mera matlab h Sanju madam hum bas ja rhe hain! Chalo Sid bhaiji! Are chalo!

Sanju: Ae dadda aaj hi lano hai yaad hai na!? Chalo jao ab turant se pehlo!

Sid and Bala: Ma'am! (greeting)

They turned to go but arey arey dono ulta mude aur takra gaye🤦

Sid: Arey BalaG Bro lag gyi! (while rubbing his forehead)

Bala: (while rubbing his forehead) Arey Sid Bhaiji aap idhar kyo mude? Picnic spot se nikalne ki jagah to wo udhar h na! (while pointing in his front)

Sid realised when he turned around and saw the exit. Seeing his funny expression everyone laughed.
Bala: (whispering but still rubbing his forehead) Kahin Sanju madam ko dekhkar to aapke hosh nhi ud gaye?
[Sanju heard it and looked at Sid while giggling within]

Sid saw Bala with pleading eyes and held hand and dragged him away!

Everyone burst into laughter at their antics while #Chitra laughed uncontrollable😂. Sanju shook her head & smiled internally at these two 'baurantaye hue prani'.
Sanju: Chirkut!

Monu was near the exit of the party area.. she was still giggling. SidLa came near the exit to go.

Sid: Kameeni! Meri yahan hawa tight hogyi thi aur tu hass rhi h! (while narrowing his eyes)
Koi nahi.. Mera bhi din ya raat aayega ya aayegi (while wiping his fake tear)
This changed her giggle to laugh😝

Mo: (while pulling his cheeks) Let's see Kameene!
Sid: Ouch!
Monu laughed. Sid saw her laughing and he smiled, a genuine and sweet smile. Sid cupped her face and kissed her forehead with loads of love 💕
She smiled at him.

Sid: Take care Monu! And don't worry me xyz company ka hi pen launga kahi se bhi dhundke.
Mo: You too Sid! Love you!
Sid: Love you more!
They smiled at eachother. Meanwhile Bala who witnessed this, prayed in his mind to always preserve these two idiot yet sweet and cute creatures, with a smile.

~This TS starts from the picnic scene when Monami overheard the talks of Karan nd Faizi.
(I know intro thoda (I mean bhot) zyada bada hogya😅 but kya krun I love simi and Bala)~

Imagine this bgm😿

"Papa ki pari hai, emotional hokar koi na koi gadbad zaroor kardeti h. Inke jese 'ameerzade' bache irresponsible hote h. Kucch bhi galat kregi sambhalna hume hi padega na! And about this, isse zyada kuchh nhi h. THERE'S NOTHING AT ALL!"

Sitting on a bench on that 'miserable' day, she was just trying to brush off all this from her mind but she remembered his words exact.

Though she NEVER felt bad on this day, this time, she was just feeling disgusting! Jispar wo trust karti h, wo uspar trust to dur he misunderstood her. Was she anyhow at fault? Ha starting me usne use chor smjh liya tha but she apologized na! Aaj dopahar jo usne bola tha, jese use encourage kiya tha uske baad she felt dono ke beech ki misunderstanding dur ho gyi h but ye uski galatfehmi nikli. She was lost in her thoughts... Her eyes welled up with tears of anger first but then thinking about the date, she could no longer resist crying.

~I miss you😞 escaped her mouth when she felt his presence. Maybe he had heard it. She could recognise his footsteps. Wo tha, uske pas. Though she liked him, right now she just wanted to avoid him.

Karan came and sat beside her, on the same bench ofc.
Monami saw him sitting, with the corner of her eyes.
Karan sat beside her nd looked at her.
She looked at him once but as soon their eyes met, Karan lowered his a bit and Monami turned her head towards the opposite side. Feeling the awkwardness of the situation,

Ks: Wese, a.. kise miss kr rahi ho?

Yes, he heard it. Monami was still facing the other side. She started breathing lil heavily, sobbing. Karan noticed her jeans getting wet due to a drop - the tear drop that was struggling to stay at its place, lost the battle - just as she was losing the battle of life(as she never felt bad on this day but today she felt worst), it fell as she closed her eyes.

He didn't know why but he was feeling awful. Yes he agreed that he had hurted her. But, this felt something more than just guilt.
He again tried to start the conversation but she flinched as in she was now 'also' physically hurt.
Automatically, his eyes narrowed in anticipation seeing her flinching. (guys he also flinched)

Ks: Umm.. wo

But Raja Babu tussi late hogye!! Isse pehle wo kuchh bol pata Monami bench' se uthkar Jane lagi.

Ks: Mo.. Monami! (he sceamed yet in a low voice so that kisi aur ko sunayi na de)
Karan Mo ke left me betha tha. Jab Karan usse rokne ki koshish kar rha tha to uska right hath (jo theek tha(arey left me sling tha na!)) Bench ke right end par pada jahan par use kuchh wet feel hua... He lifted his hand and his stress lines disappeared as what he saw was enough for his shock.
He saw his hand with few BLOOD drops and then Monami, who was running towards her tent after him calling her.

Ks: (to himself) Ye kya kar diya mene! Me to bas.. bas bol rha tha mujhe kya pata tha ki wo itni hurt hogi! Ese to use chhoti si bhi chot lg jaye to apna pain hide nhi krti... Ab use is keel (nail) ki wajah se lag gayi that too when she's not mentally okay, she hid her pain! Kuchh to hai.. wo bhot zyada hurt ho gyi..
Mene.. mene use.. use misjudge krliya, I MISJUDGED HER! It's all my bloody fault! he thought with irritated expression while banging his hand on the bench and hence dragging everyone's attention.

Ks: Umm.. sorry wo.. you people continue..

Saying this Karan left to Monami's tent. Everyone was near the bonfire including Sanju.

Faizi knew what blunder Karan had done. Seeing him approaching Monami a small smile crept on his face..

Faizi: Isse pehle humne humesha Karan ko apni 'ameerzadon' wali baat par ade rahe dekha hai, koi kese react karega ya kar raha hai isse use koi fark nahi pada. Par aaj Monami ko dekhkar use bura lag rha hai. Monami alag hai! Tum heere se bhi anmol ho Monami! Ya Allah humare dost ko ese hi kisi ki zaroorat thi. Use Monami-Tsunami ko manane ki himmat dena! (genuinely praying with hands open and eyes closed)

Koel noticed him like that. She sensed tension in his face.
Koel: (while sitting beside him but looking in front) Kya hua? Lost lag rhe ho!

Hearing her, Faizi opened his eyes and looked at her. She saw him and raised her eyebrows expecting her answer while tucking her hair.
He smiled at her and nodded negativity blinking his eyes.

Faizi: Kuchh nhi bas ese hi..
Koel: Nhi bataoge? a second pause
Thik hai mat batao jao.
Saying so she looked the other side making a cute pout.

Faizi, who hadn't expected some introvert girl to talk to him and actually reflecting concern, raised his brows and then chuckled at her cute antics.

Faizi: Are mohotarma aap to naaraz hogyi! Hum to bas apne dost ke liye Dua kar rahe the.

Koel cute pout converted to a sweet smile. She looked at his happy face. Looked straight into his eyes trying to see into his pure soul and know about him more, uncover his folds. Yes she agreed she was quite much of an introvert but talking to him never felt like strange, from their first meet she talked to him like she would do with someone close, someone whom she could trust blindly.
Seeing him tensed for his friend,

Koel: Faizi, tum bhot ache ho! (genuine compliment)
Faizi smiled.

Faizi: Tum bhi Koel!

They both were smiling looking in other's eyes while in the background a random recruit was singing Raabta(ofc not for them but for enjoyment). As soon as he stopped everyone clapped thus breaking the trance of KoeZi. They straightened a bit.

Koel: Wese kuchh hua hai kya tumhare dost ko? All okay?

Faizi: (in mind) hua to nhi hai par agar Janab Ji ne Monami ko na manaya to Tsunami zaroor aajayegi! Bhale hi Monami kuchh kare ya na kare... Kyonki Karan ko bhale hi pata na ho par wo kya kar rhi usse use fark padhta hai! Shayad Ishq ki pehli seedhi (care) mukammal kar chuke hai wo! (smiled)

Seeing him lost again Koel tapped his shoulder. Faizi came out of his trance.
Faizi: huh?

Koel: Arey kya huh!? Mene puchha tumhare dost ke liye tum pray kyo kar rahe ho all good? Aur tum ho ki smile kar rahe ho!

Faizi: Arey tum wo sab chhodo! Itna acha mausam hai aur sab gaa rahe hai... Let's enjoy!
Koel narrowed her eyes.

Koel: Tum avoid kar rahe ho na! Thik hai mat batao jao! (she pouted and looked away)
Faizi chuckled within and got up from there. Koel sensed it

Koel: (to herself, still facing the other side) Yeh to chala gya! Abhi kher leti hun iski!

She got up and turned but to her surprise Faizi was holding the guitar and started singing!

She was smiling when he was singing. Though it wasn't perfectly melodious but was enough for her! What mattered were the emotions which were clearly portrayed...

After finishing the song he came back and sat.
Faizi: (looking at Koel who was already seated smiling) Kya ab is nacheez ko maafi milegi mohotarma?
(dramatically)

Koel: (showing fake anger and hiding her giggle) Jao! Maaf kiya tumhe, tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge ki kis dilwali se tumhara paala pada tha!

Faizi: (in mind) Kash tumse humara paala ese hi padte rahe Koel!
Faizi: Hum aapke shukrguzar hain devi! (while bowing a little with folded hands)

This eventually made herself lose her control over her giggle and laughed seeing his condition. Seeing her lovely laughter he also smiled:)

To be continued...
I know story kum di hai but intro bada hogya plus me sirf 'MoRan' par likhne wali thi but baki bonds par bhi likhdiya isliye ise OS ki bajaye TS bana diya.. Next part kal tak aajayega hopefully!
Mene isme kafi bonds par likha so honestly I loved writing it! Zdmn ke sare bonds I just love!💙
SiMi, SiMi+Bala, SidSa, SidLa, (maybe a glimpse of Chitra-Bala) and last me thodu sa Faizi-Karan and Faizi-Tsunami, & KoeZi bhi Dene ki koshish ki...

Nd ofcourse our Moran because ye originally unpe hi likhna tha par me bhawnao me beh gyi😂 (don't hit me!)
Btw aapko kya lagta hai jo mene kuchh hints diye hain usse?
(Like ice cream flavour, pen of a special company, Sid saying take care and one more thing)

Hope you'll liked it! Bye bye 💞
April the 1st.