Dear Marshmallow Book Club Members. I really appreciate all the comments and corrections. I can't reply to all of you because of my tight and busy schedule.
But I will fix and edit my story as soon as I can. I'm just trying to take a break because I don't want to hate my own story because of my grammar mistakes. It already happens in my first story ' Curse Of The Witch '.

I just start challenging myself to write a story in English just this March so I'm not that good at this language. Maybe a little bit of understanding will do.

For the comments about why did I not discuss this and that in my story. I want to properly discuss about the reincarnation thing in some of the chapters. I want to left it hanging for now because it will be kinda fast if I discuss it in the first 10 chapters of my story. This is a reincarnation story so the phase will be kind of slow.

I'm also in a dillema because one of my weaknesses are tenses and grammars. I have a great sense in making a plot, I know that but those weaknesses makes me sad.

I actually look for an editor but he/she is quite busy in his/her private life so I'm not pushing him/her to edit my work. So I will try to edit it on my own.

And for the other readers who read this. I hope you can understand also.

English is not my native language, I'm just challenging myself so I will improve in this language. I love my story and I have this plan in translating it in Tagalog which is my native tongue.

And I hate it if someone said that I don't love my work. This is my story, my own plot, my own imagination... I try my best to dig in my inner brain just to make this.

Yes, some of the comments didn't say that directly but it's pointing that I don't love my story because I didn't make an effort in editing it before posting.

I actually said in the summary part that my story is raw, totally raw a lot of grammar mistakes. And especially I'm bad at pointing at my own mistakes.

But I hope guys you didn't say anything about me not loving my own story because that's the last thing that a writer don't want to hear from anyone.

I actually appreciate the corrections because that will be a good use for me but never ever said to me that I hate my story. If you want to quarrel with me... Hate my story all you want but don't ever said those words to me...

Thank you for reading this, I hope all of you guys have a good and pleasant day.