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I'm excited about this one!
Cover:
The cover supports the title through the wonderfully exaggerated representation. Your use of the ocean was a smart choice. This indicates that the lovers are not only in a position where they're unable to get to each other, but are limited by something that is so powerful and uncontrolled.
Blurb:
It introduces the reader to a world of poems of hope and inspiration.
The saying at the ending mentions heartbreak, which one might see as an indication of some not so happy poems to come as well. Are those your words? Cause they were really thought provoking.
Diction/Imagery:
The choice of simple, complex and connotative words each create its unique effect.
The use of the first person narrative puts the reader in your shoes. He or she is transported to your life and gets to see, feel and relate to your emotions and experiences.
The rhetorical questions also serve as an effective way for one to pause and reflect on the messages you're conveying.
Grammar:
Almost no grammatical and typographical errors. The punctuations and capitalisation caused a desirable effect.
Generally,
As a personal reader (with absolutely no prejudice while giving this review), your words are definitely impactful and I believe many future readers would share similar views about your work as well!
Thank you so much for requesting! Do check out "Lovers at Bay" by Harbor_CE!
Have a wonderful day and expect more updates soon. Keep requesting!
I don't know if anyone noticed, but I skipped two requests and continued with the rest . I only did so because there are some people helping to review those novels. They would be done as soon as they can!
Thanks for your support and have a wonderful day!
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