Name: Lost Love 

Author: Sofia7Elliott 

Genre: Romance

Mature: No

Chapters Read: 2

REVIEW

Title: 4/10

The title is not at all appealing, quite a common choice, which can click readers that this book will revolve around a cliché theme. You can think of an alternative. If you need help, please PM me.

Blurb: 6/10

Well, the blurb couldn't get my attention much. It had grammatical errors, and you could have broken it into fragments. Most importantly, you mentioned that Maya was losing her talent, it isn't grammatically and literally correct. You could have mentioned that Maya was losing her interest or something like that? 

Mention some interesting things or maybe, something kind of mystery which can hook up the readers.

Cover: 5.5/10

This you could have changed. The filter, fonts, and the position of the name of the story aren't well. You should approach a graphic designer, maybe. 

Plot: 7.5/10

I felt that it was a good thing. If you could also build up the mystery in the first two chapters only, which could have left the readers puzzled that what could be the reason. And most importantly, I liked the descriptive narration of yours, where you also described the place and surroundings.

Since it's just the starting, I can't mention much. However, I feel that you have a good plot building up in your mind for the story.

Grammar: 6.5/10

Majorly, tense errors. First, choose the tense of narration that you want. You keep on changing from past tense to present tense, which doesn't appeal to a reader. Apart from that, you have good grammar and there were just slight errors. 

Flow and Pace: 7.5/10

I feel that the pace is fine, as for the first two chapters. But, I can't tell now, as it's just the starting.

Character Development: 5.5/10

I can't tell much about this also. But, I didn't feel the connection as to why her professional problems are hampering her personal life. Apart from that, her character was well build up who found peace in writing when she had no one to express, as she was an introvert. Jonah, just a mere description, but his character was interesting. I would defy from mentioning him now.

Uniqueness: 3/5

There's uniqueness in your plot, but you are not able to maybe express it. I can't guide you, since I have to read further chapters too.

Total: 45.5/90

I am not satisfied with giving this score, because you deserve more. I can't explain now, because you have to pen down a lot. 

Hope it helps. 

Sorry for publishing late. 

❁ Thank you for believing in my review book ❁

-Published on 10 Sept 2021-