Un: umra_rawaha

Book: To Complete The Incomplete Love 

Genre: Fanfiction 

Fandom: AnuPre

Chapters Read: 10 

Mature: No

REVIEW

Title: 4.5/10 

The title was too big. It was not catchy enough as much as your plot was. However, it gave a rough idea about the plot, but I would recommend you change it or make it crisp.

Cover: I am not talking about this point, since, I can't judge my work. 

Blurb: 6.5/10 

The first life of the blurb was interesting. Great work with that! I see that you have put a lot of effort into the blurb, but, grammar inaccuracy is making it worse. So, try to focus on proper punctuation. Break the single paragraph into fragments. 

Plot: 8/10

I really liked the plot and I assume that it is your plus point. No dramas, even in fantasy, you wrote a realistic view of things. Kudos for that. But, I did find some potholes, find it in character development. 

Character Development: 10/15

Characters, everyone was interesting. However, if you had given a proper introduction to them, it would be convenient to better understand your characters. I am saying just for Harshit and Nitika. I got to know in the middle of the story that they both practice law.

But, the relatable characters kept me hooked on your story. And, my favorite character has to be Anjali, the angel. 

You should also give them some space for their emotions. 

Grammar: 6.5/15

Grammar is the thing that brings a dull expression to your story. Everything was up to the mark except Grammar. A major problem is punctuation. You tend to write the sentence in a flow, where the punctuations should have been placed. Also, take care of breaking the long paras into smaller fragments. 

I would suggest you use editing extensions like Grammarly- I personally use it. (But, make sure, you use a device that doesn't have your personal info, because it can process everything.) 

Or, go for an editing shop on Wattpad. Also, you can edit chapters in Docs. 

Flow and Pace: 12/15

I think it was managed well. So, kudos for that. But, I would like to point that if was feeling rushed too. So, don't hesitate to make it longer. I think your story could have been dedicated 2-3 more parts.

Uniqueness: 3.5/5

This book was unique. I just want to say that the realistic plot was the major attraction for me. And, of course, that oily hairy point. So, I appreciate you for that. 

Total: 51/80

P.S. I suggest this book to everyone who wants to read something sensible. It is a beautiful combination of fantasy and realistic genres.

And, extremely sorry for being this late. 

This was the last review.

❁ Thank you for believing in my review book ❁

-Published on 13 June 2021-