It's time for 1st peer review round, where writers of the workshop will be leaving feedback on each other's written Logline and talk about the intrigue factor. Whether the logline feel compelling to you or does something feel lacking. Leave comments with an intention to help fellow writers. One can opt to leave comments in comment section only, on however many loglines you want.

Loglines:

1: Author_Deliah_Rose ; Romance
Logline: When an upcoming actor talks a renowned star out of jumping off a local bridge, Tessa Graves must overcome her troubled past in order to allow herself to fall in love again.

2: AnOtherFantasyGirl ; Fantasy
Logline: When Rose's assassination quest is jeopardized by her own automates, she and her targets flee in the nearby forest, but an unwelcoming twist propels them into a strange deadly world.

3: ClaireMari29 ; Romance
Logline: When fate gives her a momentum to reunite with someone she admires and adores from her childhood years. She must do everything it takes, even making risks and consequences to ensure that she'll see him again as time passes by.

4: AnaqatRaschid ; Fantasy
Logline: A newly orphaned lad is forced to grow up overnight as he works towards avenging his parents death by recovering his heritage.

5: Aspiring_Saphire ; Fantasy
Logline: A teenage peasant, who was working as a serf for her entire life discovers her abilities as a shape shifter in a library. Causing her to get captured by the government, and forced to defeat an underground insurgency, and overcome her fear from dangerous missions in this nation-changing operation.

6: CANGEL1915 ; Romance
Logline: A young woman and a man, both scarred by abusive childhoods, seek solace in each other's embrace, but when their shared trauma resurfaces, they must confront their pasts head-on or risk losing one another and the future they've always longed for.

7: Kanha_Sakhi ; Romance
Logline: When an unexpected alliance occurs, Suhana must deal with the hurt of betrayal and completely new experiences in order to finally find the peace and happiness she craved and deserved.

8: Thatgurlaturdoor ; New Adult
Logline: In a world where wealth and power dictate your relationship, a young billionaire must endure obsessive suitors and envious family members and emerge on top in all aspects (love included!), all while her story is told through the lenses of unreliable narrators.

9: NatXWrites1 ; Romance
Logline: A high-strung writer escapes to a secluded cabin to Christmas, only to be forced to confront her mixed feelings about the season when a cat incident forces her to live with a disreputable bad boy celebrity, leading to an unexpected romance that melts her icy heart.