so, i had this really good Idea, that i think you guys might like. what if you guys wanted me to review your books and give you ideas and tips to help your writing? would you guys like that? i already do it for a friend of mine and it really helps her. what do you guys think?

i would prolly comment in whatever paragraph or on whatever chapter i can do to help you with this scene. but do NOT take what i say to heart, im just giving you my opinions and constructive criticism.