Well only three people entered, so it wasnt that hard to choose. But please no hate against me or any other contest entrees.

3rd place-

Miklapie

The plot twist in your story was great, but I suggest making it a little longer next time and maybe a little more detailed. I would also say it wasn't every organized and there were some parts I  had to re read  to understand. Other then that the plotline and twist  in ploy were amazing! I will do my best to get you your prizes ASAP.

2nd place-

jazstarco

Your story started of sounding of great, but you made the mistake of switching from second person and third person. That made the story unorganized, and slightly confuzzling. I truly believe you have the potential to make this into a full story, and as your friend I would love to help you out. (Yes I am her friend irl, but I swear this rating was not biased and I did not help her in any what so ever. You can ask her, I gave her constructive criticism to her face.) I can make you a book cover for this book if you want to continue it or for any other book, you'll receive your other prizes ASAP.

AND FINALLY LAST, BUT NOT LEAST, WR HAVR FIRST PLACE-

AlexHunter2

You had a great story overall, length was perfect an everything. The only thing I can say of the top of my head is that you repeated I too much. Other then that it was an amazing story. For your prizes you can ask me to make you a book cover whenever you want and I'll get your other prizes done ASAP.

Thank you so much for being supportive and entering, and I truly hope y'all decide to enter again. Can't wait to hear from you again!