I'm so so so soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry this is late. I want to thank altumes for making sure I don't completely forget about this😂😂. I forgot to judge, then u fell sick, then I just wouldn't stop procrastinating. So that's my excuse for being late, but no more!

3rd place-
FantasyUnforgotten
I really enjoyed the twist you added of  the main character writing to their abuser, but there were a few grammar mistakes and your story was one large paragraph. Other than that you had a good idea. It was troublesome trying to choose between you and altumes for second, but I had to put you in third for you story was void of an paragraphs.

2nd place-
altumes
I like how you made your story like a diary entry. It really expressed the feelings of the character and how much every decision she made weighed down on her. Your story flowed well, but there were a few choppy parts that you could work on.

1st place-
Carla_The_Exeed
O.M.G. I absolutely loved your storyline. I thought it was really interesting and you should definitely update it cause I would continue reading. The only thing I must say is that there a grammar mistakes, especially commas, I noted. If you want me to point them out to you, PM and I'll do that.

Once again sorry for the late update. I hope y'all are enjoying this book and reading the winners stories. PM for your prizes, and I really hope y'all enter again next time cause I would be delighted if you did. Also please go one chapter back and tell me what you think of my short story. If possible comment on things I can make better or if anything was unclear. It's not one of my bests cause I'm not used to writing in third person, but please please please please please do go back and comment what you think.
Thanks! 💖

Love,
  Redrobin