Fear Winners
Well I only had two entries this time. Y'all please enter, and if you did don't forget to inform me you enetered. (preferably in the comments or in PM I have bad memory) I'll be judging between the two entries, please re-enter, or enter for the first time. It'd be alot more fun with more applicants.
Second place-
Your entry was definitely great! The only thing I would say is try to re-read it and check places where you could make it flow better and more smoothly. As your prize I won't be able to like your story for it was submitted through the comments, but feel free to ask me for a book cover whenever you want.
First place-
Your entry was more of a piece of art rather then a writing. It was simple and elegant. Each detail was etched into my head. Your choice of words, and imagery was beautiful! I commented of the few things you could fix. The only thing I can really say is that amidst the imagery don't forget to add the action. Your writing revolved around the imagery so much what was going on in the surroundings, and the action in the storyline got lost and became very confusing. If you can fix these few things you have potential to make this a great book!
So so sorry for the test update! I had this part written, but forgot to update!😅 I'll get the next contest up asap, and please please please please do enter!
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