Dear writer,
I want you to know that, you are very talented and creative, the way you are. If you get a negative comment on your book, I urge you not to get offended. Instead, work it out with your novel and make sure it's best, among the rest. Although, there's no perfect. Try to make your work(s) as perfect as you can. Good luck, romance participants!

1. Clinch Providence by son_abishar

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Description: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Setting: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 88 /100
Position: 3rd
Review: In a country like Egypt, it is uncommon to find families who chooses husbands for their daughters, but it also happens. And finding a story with this theme and storyline is rare, unlike other romance novels.

First, the book title is a catchy one. It attracts the reader to it even before knowing what genre it is, or what the book is all about. 'Clinch Providence' to me, sounds mysterious, more of mystery thriller. Something related to hate, anger and vengeance.

The red and black, and the hand with a knife on the book cover fits the story title. The book cover is awesome, but I feel the fonts are blur and needs some adjustments. Or maybe your book deserves a better book cover. Something more awesome.

Your description gave a sharp hook, I had to read it twice and I love the fact that it serves its purpose. Excellent!
I suggest that you take away the "@Son_abishar,
Hi..." Part away. Instead, use ©Copyright2022.

However, your character was multi-dimensional. This means Faime was a character who had depth and who seems to learn or grow. The only thing I noticed was that most of the sentences didn't end with a full stop, comma, exclamation or question mark. I hope you put this into consideration as you edit your book.

And this sentence in chapter 1.

"Was their a man you ever found ugly?"

Add a question mark to this.

In chapter 2, Bold Faime's POV and italics Cairo-Egypt

Double quotation like, why did he leave her?? Should be corrected. Instead, use one question mark. Avoid using two punctuation marks together except if it's going to have a quotation mark. E.g, "Stop there!"

Lastly, I noticed only one or two punctuation mistakes. Try to do a self-editing and find more beta readers to review your work. I suggest go through your work during your spare time or at night before you retire to bed. Your use of English and grammar was top-notched. It was an amazing read so far, keep the ball rolling. I also love the part when Faime got married to a guy like Zaheer Ahmad.

2. The Miracle Of A Teenager Us by
Bravesgurl

Title: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Description: 8/10
Grammar: 7/10
Setting: 6/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment:7/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 78/100
Position: 5th
Review: The title is totally for this book though, I haven't read so much yet. The title clearly indicates the seperatuon between the characters. The cover is just so.... Insightful! I love it. Your description is also an intriguing one. When I looked it up, I was tempted to read the book a second time. Lol! For the grammar, there is just a subtle mistakes here and there. It can be adjusted with a little editing. You did a great job, taking us into the phenomenal world of the characters intensely with very descriptive sentences and interesting dialogues.

Moving to the plot, I was more curious to know where the story was heading. It made me glued to the edge of my seat and the story flows smoothly from one chapter to chapter without losing any of its irradiance.

However, this novel was one that I actually enjoyed and would love to recommend. I look forward to the rest of the chapters. Keep it up, author!

3. Je Táime, Imbecile by strawberry1d

Title: 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Description: 9/10
Grammar: 7/10
Setting: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 88 /100
Position: 3rd
Review: The title is totally exotic and morassing. It gives a dark impression which actually incorporate into the novel and I love it. Your book cover is bold, beautiful, intricate and entrapping... All in a good way. I love the way the colour matches the dark dangerous theme, thereby, making it click worthy. The description is concise, yet detailed. You did a great job!

Now, grammar. This is the only thing I find faulty with the story. I know nothing about the writing style you choose, but I find you switching tenses often. It's a major turnoff. I am not a professional editor, but your book still leaves me in perplexity and confusion every now and then.

Again, you took us through the story, along side the characters in a very expressive way that can easily get us lost within the world you created. Its intense, ensnaring and most importantly, it has a voice. The plot is masterfully crafted and page turning. The details are down to earth and overt. I like the way you built tension as the story goes, it leaves high on some sort of explicit euphoria that you created and that is totally amazing. It was a wonderful thing to be lost in the world that you created for a while. I look forward to the rest of the story. Keep the ball rolling, dearest!

4. When His Heart Felt Love by
ViniShah2

Title: 10/10
Cover: 9/10
Description: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Setting: 10/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 97/100
Position: 1st
Review: The cover is wonderful and illustrative. The font is beautiful and the texts are legible, but I feel it deserves better. The story description is also well detailed.

Minyoongi and kimtaehyung, who played the roles of Jia and Yoongi, are perfect characters for the story. I love the fact that you brought up the real story behind the superstars. It made it informative and entertaining as well.

Although, memes aren't allowed on novels, I think it made the book unique of a kind, since the novel is partly fan-fiction (BTS). I hardly find a mistake.

I love the way the description left some anticipation. When paired with the book cover and the title, its a bomb! However, you did a good job with the grammar and vocabulary. I hardly came across mistakes and most importantly, I learnt some new words.

According to the book setting... It's epic, the way you led us back and forth between the lives of your characters.

Lastly, I forced myself through six chapters, becaise the dialogues weren't as engaging as the characters. Keep it up!

5. Love Strings by MyPersonalMiracle

Title: 7/10
Cover: 6/10
Description: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10
Setting: 8/10
Plot: 7/10
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 7/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 81/100
Position: 4th
Review: I love the book title. The book cover also give the dark romance vibes. I just feel the quote, "Love started with a lie" should be down a bit for visibility.

It woupd hsve been a great read if:
1. Double punctuation marks weren't used together except with a quotation mark.

"Gentlemen, please meet my finance!"

2. Amelia Thompson is a graduate in search for job gets a call from Aimat Incorporation- one of the leading companies in the city for an interview. A little surprise awaits her on the day of the interview.

Widen Matthew- The CEO of that company offers her a job hit for a different position along with a huge deal that she can never refuse. Soon, she is forced yo take the job due to her personal problem.

Instead, use this.

Amelia Thompson, a graduate in search for job, gets a call from AiMat Incorporation- one of the leading companies in the city for an interview. A little surprise awaits her on the day of the interview.

Widen Matthew, CEO of tthe incorporation offers her a job opportunity for a one-of-a-kind role, along with a package that she can't turn down. It pushs her to take the job due to her own dilemma. Lust and love is intertwined. Would Amelia ever get out of it?

3. I feel the names Emily and Amelia sounds like Hailey and Kayley. They are sound so alike and can be confused or missed up. Why not use Sarah or Veronica. Something more genuine and unfamiliar?

4. You also use space before writing the first word of the dialogue. Example, " Don't worry, Mia, you will get the job. Let's order something for dinner. "

Instead, write it like this

Sunday Afternoon in chapter 1 needs to be in bold. And one dot. Sunday Afternoon. Your frequent use of dots.

5. Write it as okay, not OK.

"Don't worry, Mia, you will get the job. Let's order something for dinner."

At the end, I love where the story was headed. Never stop writing!

6. Lights, Camera, Love! By JustTaekookThingzz

Title: 9/10
Cover: 10/10
Description: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Setting: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 7/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 90/100
Position: 2nd

Review: The book title, book cover and story description is excellent! I love the fact that you went straight into the story. However, it would have been a better read if these parts were corrected.

*"Hello, Hyung. I am desperately in need for a job, you know my dream is to visit Japan for dubbing, right?"

*Don't forget, names of nouns are to be started with capital letter.

*"What is it, Hyung?" Don't use double punctuation marks together except with quotation mark.

Reading this felt like reading a chat. Your writing was a bit here and there.

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