To tell you the truth, this was the hardest!
All the books were Amazing.
I just couldn't decide who to let out.
Yet,(sighing) had to make the choice.

I suggest you all to read the other contestants books, cause they are fabulous.

A BIG CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL THE WINNERS AND RUNNERS UP!!!

AND FOR THE PARTICIPANTS, DONT WORRY. YOU WERE GREAT!
THIS TIME I SHALL BE GIVING POINTS TO THE PARTICIPANTS AS WELL AND ONE LINERS ON WHAT THEY HAVE TO IMPROVE ON.

ALSO THERE WILL BE HONOURABLE MENTIONS!

I would love to take the interviews of the winners and runners up! I would pm you for that!

And for the stickers, please pm me!

Unravel by Gray_57_
Your plots have to be more described. All the things there have to make sense. Not well written.

Honourable mentions:
1.Strake Wood by Mirage112
: 43/50
The sour feelings in the heart of the protagonist are beautifully portrayed. There is sharp difference when her earlier life and that after the incident. But, the story proceeds quite slowly. You don't clarify what happened. Yes, she has suffered, but what next?

2.Skeleton beats the clock by Amaboo: 40/50
There was quite a different wonderful world out there in your books. Just it was not that clear. The plot has to be more described. There are a lot of things happening yet all of them have to make sense.

2nd Runner up:
Mind Reader by PenWriter16

Grammar: 10/10

Spelling: 10/10

Book Cover: 7/10
It needs to change. You have a good book, give it more justice. You can include Denise in there along with the poor girl s on me where in the dark. You know what I mean.

Story description: 9/10
I think you should tell the dreadful consequence she faces here in the blurb. I have mentioned it later.

Story plotline: 8/10
Good.
Total: 44/50

I was glued to the story. Totally. From the moment the unique case came in the life of Denise. The cat's tale was hilarious though.

I loved her absurd abilities, not just because well, they are inhuman but also because it's usage has harmful consequences on the protagonist. You showed that it definitely comes at a cost. Her boyfriend taking part in her quests is quite satisfying to see. The world needs to see that Together we are strong.

Later, her good side is also forecasted as she truly wants to save the poor girl she hardly knew risking her own life without any payments.

Just wanted to tell that, if you had included WHAT she was going to get in later in the series, right in the blurb and the first chapter, the readers would have been more interested to read the entire thing! The readers should not get bored. No matter how much ever good the story is later. If they leave it in the first chapter itself does not matter.

1st Runner Up:
A diary's essence by ifana8

Grammar: 9/10

Spelling: 9/10
Grammar: 9/10

Book Cover: 9/10
The cover is amazing! I fell in love with it.

Story description: 10/10
One of the best! You nailed it. A dead ex, a suicidal diary and the disappearance of a runaway sister! Wow, the readers will hang for this. They will bear the present to see how it affects the future and what the protagonist does to solve his troubles.
I suggest other writers to see it.

Story plotline: 7/10
Total: 44/50

The first part is quite interesting. It pulled the readers in. Some kind of magic is going on there.

We know something big is happening to Maki and that Benjamin has to face something very serious. We know that he is in for a shabby ride but what will be the outcomes of it?

That has to be portrayed.

Why would anyone care what happens to Ben or Maki for that matter, if they don't know that dreadly outcome right at the start.

You have did a good job yet, it might be a little incomplete.

Also the story is kind of slow, you know some big actions have to take place when he lands in Japan.

Also I wonder why Behind is so sour, that is a good point. It is one of the hooks to grab that readers.

Make sure to read THE ARTIST. THE OTHER WINNERS BOOKS ARE WONDERFUL AS WELL, MAKE SURE TO READ THEM!

The

3rd Winner:
Unfamiliar by catlegis

Grammar: 10/10
Spelling: 10/10

B

ook Cover: 6/10
Why? Please, please upgrade it. It has to personify your amazing characters and the plot. It is not at all professional. There are many cover ships on Wattpad. Please it is my humble request to upgrade it.

Story description: 10/10
The blurb is awesome. I know there is a lot of mystery in the later chapters however at the start, it is much like an adventure.
Story plotline: 9/10
Total: 45/50

The reader practically feels each and every emotion that the protagonist feels. The sigils on the rail calming her nerves, her hesitancy to enter the school, her brothers luck for him being younger. Her fears and worries become the readers worries. Her joy to meet her sister back along with her friends. You have done the job well.

The unfamiliar concept was totally new and I loved it. She had no familiar. Cause she could control all of them! First I thought what could be more than a dragon, then the big revelation hit me quite hard. I adored it.

To be true I wanted to place your book first, but as I had told the first chapters lie more inclined to adventure. If it had been there, I would really have placed you first.

Make sure to read THE ARTIST. THE OTHER WINNERS BOOKS ARE WONDERFUL AS WELL, MAKE SURE TO READ THEM!

2nd Winner:
It is a tie!

Death in the hotel:
by Birdsongfuzz

Grammar: 10/10
S

pelling: 10/10

Book Cover: 7/10
It is quite blurry and not so professional. If it had portrayed the bloody hotel with the two friends seeing it out of the taxi with the driver practically jumping on the next chance to run or something like that, I would have loved it.

Story description: 10/10
Story plotline: 9/10
Total: 46/50

Their friendship is lovely. I connected with them right in the first chapter. You planted the fears just at the right time and continued to do so. It made the readers curse and hop in madness when they truly landed in L.A. The suspense of the hotel was beautifully showcased. The taxi driver filling them in on the horrors of the hotel, made my heart go pounding wildly. 'Really! Why would they go there of all the places in the world! ' this is what you made the readers question.

When I knew they were the only guests there, no CCTV s and few workers, it sounded very creepy. You showed the story, instead of just telling. I loved it.

Make sure to read THE ARTIST. THE OTHER WINNERS BOOKS ARE WONDERFUL AS WELL, MAKE SURE TO READ THEM!

And

Second Identity:
by AnjiandNan

Grammar: 10/10
S

pelling: 10/10

Book Cover: 9/10
It was good. Yet you could show us the plot of the book in some kind through the cover.

Story description: 8/10
It is quite short. Also some specifics and consequences need to be included. Consequences are what hooks the readers. They then stay what currently goes on and how it affects the result.
You can see THE ARTIST description, to know more.
Story plotline: 9/10
Total: 46/50

I loved the diary fill at the start of each chapter. It showed us the true thoughts of the character. What she feels, what she thinks. It tells us what has happened in the past and what the protagonist yearns for. Victoria is quite daring to say the least. I love a female protagonist saving the day. Some good adventure also brews up later which has to be mentioned right in the blurb and the first chapter. The reader needs to know it to stay for it.

Make sure to read THE ARTIST. THE OTHER WINNERS BOOKS ARE WONDERFUL AS WELL, MAKE SURE TO READ THEM!

Finally *drumrolls*

The Winner of WriteOn Contest Mystery:

The Artist by wrapped_in_stars

A must read for all mystery lovers!

Grammar: 10/10
S

pelling: 10/10

Book Cover: 7/10
I really suggest you to update the cover. This book is mind-blowing. And it definitely demands a better one. It is quite blurry and dull. Moreover, the plot or characters are not justified here.

Story description: 10/10

The tragedy right in the blurb! I love it! It gets the readers interested to stick on for more. And you definitely want your readers to stick on.
The tragedy right there in the description! Wow! They wait like a maniac for the reveal of the assassin.

Story plotline: 10/10
The start of the book was a shoot scene, I felt as if it was truly happening. It grounded me right there.

Total: 47/50

Each chapter hooks the readers even deeper. One does not get bore at all. It has suspense, a hosting thrill, a beautiful romance and quite an adventure. Scarlet is shaped intricately. Her character makes the reader bond with her. Her day at the market showcases a unique side if her. The transfer has its own thrill and the mysterious neighbours leave a dread in each ones heart.

I totally love it.