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Judges: PrincessAurora016

AndSiriusly_Jaidyn

Guys, follow them now!

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EMBERS:

SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 10
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 50

WRITE UP: Outstanding!

The story is absolutely outstanding! The grammar and spelling is totally phenomenal. The book cover is catchy and the description is hooking. The amazing storyline keeps you on the edge and the reader never knows what would happen next. Overall experience- marvelous!

OTHER JUDGE:

SPELLING 7

GRAMMER 8

BOOK COVER 7

STORY DESCRIPTION 9

STORY LINE 9

TOTAL 40

WRITEUP: FABULOUS

FINAL MARKS: 41

THE LONE HOME :

SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 49

WRITE UP: FABULOUS!

The story is amazing and the grammar is perfect. Though there are a few misspellings in the description as well as the first chapter. The book cover is appealing. The story description is compelling and nudges the reader to read more. The story line hooks the reader right from the first chapter!

OTHER JUDGE:
SPELLING 8

GRAMMER 7

BOOK COVER 9

STORY DESCRIPTION 10

STORY LINE 9

TOTAL 43

WRITE UP: OUTSTANDING

FINAL MARKS: 43

TERRA FIRMA :

SPELLING 8
GRAMMER 8
BOOK COVER 8
STORY DESCRIPTION 5
STORY LINE 4

TOTAL: 33

WRITE UP: GOOD

The book cover is amazing and the grammar is on the point. But there are some misspellings. The story description and story line were both rather confusing. As I was reading the story I had no idea whats was going on, how the world had gotten to be so destroyed. The story was not interesting enough, as u felt there was not enough details...

A GHOST STORY

SPELLING 9
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 48

WRITE UP: GOOD

There are numerous misspellings and also some grammatical issues. The overall story line is amazing. The first sentence of the book gets you hooked and each chapter keeps you on the edge- exactly the point of a horror novella. The cover is amazing and captures attention. The story description gives a little insight as to what the story is about. The overall experience was good...

OTHER JUDGE

SPELLING 7

GRAMMER 5

BOOK COVER 6

STORY DESCRIPTION 5

STORY LINE 7

TOTAL 30

WRITE UP: GOOD

FINAL MARKS: 35

JUDGE: @Siriusly_Jaidyn

IF YOU HAVE NOT FOLLOWED HER, MAKE SURE TO DROP HER A FOLLOW AFTER READING THE CHAPTER!

CURSED:

SPELLING 8

GRAMMER 6

BOOK COVER 7

STORY DESCRIPTION 9

STORY LINE 8

TOTAL 38

WRITE UP: FABULOUS!

THE STORY IS GREAT. THERE ARE NOT MANY PLOT HOLES AT ALL. I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU INTRIGUR THE READER. THEY ARE ALWAYS ON THE EDGE OF THEIR SEATS. YOUR GRAMMAR WAS PRETY GOOD. YOUR SPELLINGS AS WELL. WHILE I DO LIKE THE COVER, I DON'T LOVE IT. BUT THE STORY ITSELF IS GREAT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

NIGHTMARE:

SPELLING 9

GRAMMER 9

BOOK COVER 10

STORY DESCRIPTION 8

STORY LINE 7

TOTAL 43

WRITE UP: OUTSTANDING

I. LOVE. THIS. BOOK. MY LEAST FAV PART WAS THE DESCRIPTION. I DID FIND A PLOT HOLE OR TWO BUT NOTHING TOO BAD. IT IS SO INTERESTING AND JUST AMAZING! THE COVER- DONT GET ME STARTED- IT IS SO GREAT AND BEAUTIFULLY DONE. YOUR SPELLINGS AND GRAMMAR MAKE ME SO HAPPY. I JUST LOVE THE BOOK.

THE PAINTER'S DEATH WISH:

SPELLING 6

GRAMMER 7

BOOK COVER 8

STORY DESCRIPTION 7

STORY LINE 6

TOTAL 34

WRITE UP: GOOD

THE SPELLING AND GRAMMAR WERE GOOD BUT NOT TOO AMAZING. THE BOOK COVER WAS HONESTLY JUST COOL. THE DISCRIPTION DOES NOT DRAW THE READER IN VERY MUCH BUT IT IS STILL AMAZING. THE STORY IS INTERESTING BUT THERE ARE A FEW PROBLEMS IN IT AS OPER MY OPINION.

INTIMITIADO:

SPELLING 8

GRAMMER 7

BOOK COVER 4

STORY DESCRIPTION 10

STORY LINE 8

TOTAL 37

WRITE UP: GOOD

THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLINGS ARE GREAT AND THE DESCRIPTION IS JUST SO AMAZING! THE STORY LINE IS GOOD AND THE WRITE UP IS CAPTURING. ALL OF THE STORY IS GOOD BUT THE COVER- IT RUINS THE WHOLE THING. ITS BORING AND DOESNT HAVE ANY CONNECTION TO THE DESCRIPTION WHATSOEVER. SO PEOPLE ARE JUST GONNA GET HECKA CONFUSED.

A WALK IN YOUR NIGHTMARE:

SPELLING 6

GRAMMER 8

BOOK COVER 2

STORY DESCRIPTION 7

STORY LINE 5

TOTAL 28

WRITE UP: GOOD

THIS STORY, YOUR GRAMMAR AND THE DESCRIPTION ARE GREAT BUT THAT'S ABOUT IT. YOUR SPELLINGS ARE GOOD AND THE STORYLINE IS SOMEWHAT INTERESTING BUT THE COVER IS NOT AT ALL UPTO THE MARK. NO OFFENSE BUT THE EYES LOOK KINDA STUPID. ITS HONESTLY BORING. PLEASE IMPROVE IT.

HEARTS BEATING AND DRUMS ROLLING!!!

THE WINNERS:

1. THE LONE HOME AND NIGHTMARE!

2. EMBERS!

3. CURSED

RUNNERS UP:

INTIMITIADO

A GHOST STORY

ORGANIZER'S NOTE:

MAN, YOU ALL WERE GREAT. IT TAKES HUGE CONFIDENCE TO PUBLISH STORIES AND MORE THAN THAT TO SEND THEM FOR COMPETITIONS. YOU ALL SHOWED THE COURAGE AND I AM SO PROUD OF THAT.

FOR THOSE WHO DIDNT WIN, DONT WORRY. SOMETIMES, YOU JUST HAVE TO GIVE IT SOME TIME AND OF COURSE LEARN FROM THE FELLOW WINNERS. LEARN THEIR WAY AND STYLE. HAVE A FEW TIPS AND TRICKS FROM THEM. YOU ALL CAN CHECK OUT THE INTERVIEWS OF THE WINNING STORIES THAT I HAVE PUBLISHED IN THIS BOOK ITSELF!

WINNERS AND RUNNERS UP, A BIG CONGRATS!!! I ADORE YOUR WORK, KEEP UP !!! YOU HAVE INVESTED A TON IN YOUR BOOK AND NOW YOUR READERS ADORE IT! FOR STICKERS YOU CAN PM ME YOUR EMAIL.