“If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time to write. Simple as that.” — Stephen King

My heartfelt congratulations to all my dear winners and participants!

I really enjoyed reading the books!

And some of them have come under my personal reading list!

Also, who did not win, don't worry, I have a special thing for you too.

I will be pointing out the upsides and downsides of your books as well!!/And why I did not choose your book.

For the stickers, pls send me your email address .

Also I want to interview the first 3 winners of fantasy! I hope you will
agree! It will be posted in this book!

IT IS MY HUMBLE REQUEST TO READ THE BOOKS OF THE WRITERS WHO HAVE FARED WELL IN THIS CONTEST. I DEFINITELY BELIEVE YOU WILL LEARN SOME GREAT THINGS.

PEOPLE'S CHOICE WINNER WILL BE DECLARED TOMORROW.

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              THE PARTICIPANTS

     WHY YOUR BOOKS DID NOT GET.         ACCEPTED?

1. ANOTHER WORLD BY berrypolls
The writeup should be more detailed, the characters need to be more well illustrated. Also when the protagonist lands in the other word, she just forgets about her real parents and planet. Like there are no feelings welling up in her heart. She accepts the prince just like that.

2.Chronicles of Eser by BluefireFantasy:
The cover has to change. It is childish and blurred. Also, the plots have to be well planned out and more importance has to be given to the world inside the protagonist's mind, rather than just the outside world.

Though you have some amazing readers!

3. City of clouds by SkullantacySmith
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The cover needs A LOT OF UPGRADATION. The new world has a lot of regions and they have their fantastic qualities. And I loved that. Though all of it was just bombarded in one chapter on the reader without giving sufficient time to understand the personality and character of the lead.

4. Found by saracmack

The start is cliche. There are no descriptions. The sentences are just written like you are writing a dairy. Pls, don't get me wrong. You can read TO KILL A SERPENT if you want to know more of what I mean. Though I loved the cover of your book.

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So the WINNERS!!!!

(DRUMROLLS)

2 ND RUNNER UP!

It is a TIE

SPARKLING LAKE BY LheaRyder

Grammar: 9/10
Spelling: 10/10
Book Cover: 9/10
Story description: 9/10
Story plotline: 7/10
Total: 44/50

AMAZING WRITEUP: GOOD!

I liked everything about the first chapter and I thought that this book was going to be a winner.
I actually fell in love with the first chapter where the loving mother tucked both of her pieces of heart in their bed and narrated the story of the mysterious forest and the pure souled girl. The girl taught a lot to me personally. The market, the library, the librarian we're so intricately explained. THE PLOT WAS SUPERB. Making me live in the moment. I actually was in that world.

But then, the next chapter faded my interest.

Let me tell you what stopped me from adding you as a winner:
The bomb destroyed her entire family. Her childhood memories, her existing supporters and blood, her heart souls DIED and there was so little remorse for them. SO LITTLE FELLINGS about them. So little breakdowns when she has lost them forever.While I loved the heart-melting, soul breaking remorse of her best friend. Her family needed more than that, you know

THE DREAM CATCHER AND THE CONJURER'S CHARM! BY Heuristic_Hashmath

Grammar: 10/10
Spelling: 10/10
Book Cover: 7/10
I think that who the dream catcher is and why is the conjurer's charm has to be personified in the cover, like at least something related to it. Also it is a little blur and not so professional.

Story description: 9/10

Story plotline: 8/10

Total: 44/50

Capturing writeup: GOOD!

This story is VERY UNIQUE. It is not Cliche at all. It is very mysterious and keeps the reader hooked. The brother and sister bond is so cute. The writer is very creative and his work is very original.

1ST RUNNER UP!
IT IS MY HUMBLE REQUEST TO READ THE BOOKS OF THE WRITERS WHO HAVE FARED WELL IN THIS CONTEST. I DEFINITELY BELIEVE YOU WILL LEARN SOME GREAT THINGS.

LORD OF THE ALDARI! BY Miafrost601

Grammar: 9/10
Spelling: 10/10
Book Cover: 7/10
It is a bit blurry. And it looks a little childish(pls don't get me wrong). It should personify more things. Design a good cover for a good book like yours.
Story description: 9/10
Story plotline: 9/10

Total: 44/50

Capturing Writeup: GOOD.

It was so good yet there is just a small gap between perfection and Very Good. I think the book needs to be a little bit more clear on who the creature, the protagonist is.

Wow! This book gave so much importance to character development. The nature of the elfish protagonist is very well explained. His new responsibility and the changes it brings in him, the different emotions he experiences is so genuine. A reader becomes the character itself. The reader indeed knows how will the lead react, what does he feel. That is such an important part of character development. The past of the lead and it's aftermaths on the lead is also so adequately felt.

There is a lot of suspense of what actually a creature, the protagonist is. A fantasy is rooted deep in the book, right in its core.

3rd WINNER!

THE FATE'S CHOSEN! BY authorcat14

Grammar: 10/10
Spelling: 10/10
Book Cover: 6/10
This book definitely demands a better cover. It would be an injustice to have such a wonderful book this cover. I think you should improve it.
Remember, the first impression is an important one.
Story description: 10/10
Story plotline: 9/10
Total: 45/50

Capturing writeup: FABULOUS!

To say the truth, I really did not very well understand the first part ( not the actual first chapter), where chaos is rivaled with fate.
But then the next chapter, took me out of India, out of quarantine right into the old man's Pub on the only road between the three kingdoms, in practically nowhere. The Old Man is characterized deeply, his thoughts are scripted down in a fantastic manner, his boring life yet his pure and kind soul won my heart. The big towns don't value true souls and only see qualification- bloody fools! A kind soul was worth more than a thousand stinking rude money robbing 'high qualifiers'! It correlated brilliantly in our own world. That is the reason Google is so successful. They don't hire candidates based on grades.

Then the loud thundering, it shaking the pubs, the old man helping the hero of the world risking his own life with the peacemakers. The descriptions took me into the small pub beside the road not even on the map of its world.

It fires up my curiosity when the next chapter displays the bastard child of an excuse hurting a well-wisher treating him like garbage, totally different from the earlier chapter. Yet his past being unknown and his upbringing not so well brings a little sympathy even for that bastard. It plays with the readers' feelings so much. It is so hard to do yet the writer has achieved it. Good!

I would love to take your interview, I will pm you for that.

2nd WINNER!

THE OTHER WORLD! BY FeministWitch_13

Grammar: 10/10
Totally perfect.

Spelling: 10/10
No mistake.

Book cover: 8/10
I think it needs a little up-gradation. For instance, THE OTHER WORLD must look like something, not just some water body. Forgive me if I said something wrong cause I think the forests have something to do with the other world and not a water body.

Story Description: 9/10
It is interesting yet just a little short and less revealing.

Storyline: 10/10

It hooked me right from the start and had cool cliff hangers.

Total: 47/50

Capturing Writeup:  Fabulous.

The only reason you did not win the first prize was that the fantasy part lacked a little as compared to the WINNER of the contest.

Trust me- it is in my personal reading list. I love it!
The antagonist is well written. The earlier stay of her, and the decision of them leaving it, bringing up her past, thus letting us know more about her past life and what she cares about, how actually she is. A bookworm, an introvert, a fantasy adventurer, and a perky teenager who wants some exciting stuff coming her way.

Their parents are different from so many. They actually want to go to a secluded place leaving the hub hub dusty city for some good inspiration is amazing. Most parents leave their quite serene villages to go in search of high income to industrial giant polluted cities. But these are unusual in a good way.

Then the train ride, the screeching halt for some time, the suspicion it raised in the readers' mind right at the start catches their attention. Action right at the start is what captivates the reader.

I would love to take your interview, I will pm you for that.

You also have some great readers!

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THE FANTASY WINNER OF THE WRITE ON CONTEST!

TO KILL A SERPENT! BY angeltheory

GRAMMAR: 10/10

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Absolutely perfect. The beautiful and unique usage of words woven into elegant writing won my heart.

SPELLING: 10/10

No question. What can I say! It is perfect.

BOOK COVER: 7/10

The book cover was the most important and only Downfall of the book. I think you really need to upgrade it.

STORY DESCRIPTION: 10/10

It reveals the main track of the story and is to the point. Short and interesting.

STORYLINE: 10/10
My God!! I love that the main lead is so insecure and quite relatable to anyone actually. Not the cliche hero, as so many books, adore. Fantasy and the book totally merge into each other. I was visualizing a movie casting in front of my eyes, as I was reading the book. His friend is just another magical and unique as the book.

Total: 47/50

CAPTURING WRITEUP:

OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!

Stories hold so much power. No one should underestimate it. Stories have shaped the greatest beings that ever lived and this is one beautiful story. Kai's father is wonderfully explained. He is in the fare sharing his stories to the next curious little generation. Indeed indirectly putting the seed of embarking on an adventurous journey in the moldable minds of the youth. The scene when Kai's mother held her head high, being strong, and facing bravely the world's judgment with fierce determination walking among the crowd not so likable. Gerund is one so intricately explained. He was loathsome. And the beliefs of society get the readers to sympathize with the protagonist and his troublesome friend. And the belly clutching laughing scene of Kai's friend causing the scene with the soldiers and the detailed outcome of all the mishappenings.

The sudden onset of the adventure they mistakenly embark on - the forest and it's distinct unnaturalness and dark aura is something the reader will continue reading the book for.

To conclude, it is awesome!
Personal note: I hope someday, your book will definitely be published. You have gained a faithful reader.

I would love to take your interview, I will pm you for that.

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