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Adventure Results!

"Read, read, read. Read everything -- trash, classics, good and bad, and see how they do it. Just like a carpenter who works as an apprentice and studies the master. Read! You'll absorb it. Then write. If it's good, you'll find out. If it's not, throw it out of the window."
--William Faulkner

As the great writer and NOBEL PRIZE LAUREATE said, don't worry if you haven't won. Just read the winning novels!  You will absorb them!

All thanks to the beautiful and amazing judge

KaushikiGanguly !!!!

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I would be asking for the interviews of winners soon!!!

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The curse of the werewolves by Tiger11223344

Feedback- The cover and description are good. But the story does not live upto the mark. The spellings are fine, but the grammar needs to be improved and corrected. The author has a pretty good werewolf story idea, but has not been able to pen it well. The plot lacks proper pace and flow, it is sketchy and lacks unity of time, place, and action. 

Grammar- 6/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 8.5/10

Story description- 10/10

Story line- 5/10

Total- 39.5/50

Capturing write up- ok

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Amanda born of the storm by TinoTheWriter

Feedback- The cover and description are okay, but intriguing. The spellings are fine, but grammar needs to be brushed up. The story has a good plot, has a nice pace and intrigues the readers. Some proper editing will do the book a lot of good.

Grammar- 7.5/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 8/10

Story description- 7/10

Story line- 8.5/10

Total- 41/50

Capturing write up- good

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Purple blood by Ririflower

Feedback-The cover and description are good and catchy. The spellings are fine, grammar could use a bit of brushing up. The storyline and characters are really good, the plot is well-paced and nicely set. A really good read.

Grammar- 8.5/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 9/10

Story description-8/10

Storyline- 9.5/10

Total- 45/50

Capturing write up- fabulous

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Just a sentence by NoAngelsWalking

Feedback- The cover is not very promising but the description is eye-catching. The grammar is quite good, spellings are fine. The storyline is nothing like I have ever seen before and the characterisation and stream of consciousness is a delight! A truly wonderful book, the author deserves all the praise he/she gets and more!

Grammar- 9/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 8/10

Story description- 9/10

Storyline- 10/10

Total- 46/50

Capturing write up- outstanding

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Frozen grimoire by AKVillanueva     

Feedback- The cover is a bit childish, but the description is interesting. Spellings are fine but grammar needs a lot of brushing up. The story is extremely mouthy, has a lot of unnecessary description and words, which distracts the readers and bores them. It is very Johnsonese, could do with a good deal of editing, and have more unity of time, place, and action inspite of the spontaneous past-present conflict of the protagonist. 

Grammar- 7/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 7/10

Story description- 7.5/10

Storyline- 8/10

Total- 39.5/50

Capturing write up- ok

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The groundbreakers by  @infinte_neeanu

Feedback- The cover is okay, the description definitely eye catching. The grammar needs to be improved as there are several errors, and improper use of certain words. The characterisation needs to be more developed. The idea behind the book is really good, the writer only needs to tighten the storyline, which can be easily done while editing. Overall, a pretty good read!

Grammar- 6.5/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 8.5/10

Story description- 8/10

Storyline- 7.5/10

Total- 40.5/50

Capturing write up- good

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Psychic's psyche by PersonaStand

Feedback- The cover and description need some work. Grammar needs to be improved and corrected. The concept behind the book is good but potrayal is poor and really needs to be worked upon and reimagined. There is absolutely no connection between one scene to another, nothing to demarcate past and present, and the 'fourth wall breaking-interacting with the readers' also has no clarity as to when it is a part of the plot and when it is the author speaking. Overall, a confused mess, really needs a lot of editing and rewriting, I am sorry to say.

Grammar- 7/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 7.5/10

Story description- 7.5/10 

Storyline- 5/10

Total- 37/50

Capturing write up- ok

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9. Searching for Chi by CassandraHW

Feedback- The cover is pretty good, but the story description could do with some work. Grammar could be improved and perfected with editing. The storyline is slow, but not boring. However, the characterisation is poor, there is a gap between the readers and the characters which only the author can fill by editing the story and making the characters more real.

Grammar- 7.5/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 9/10

Story description- 7/10

Storyline- 6.5/10

Total- 40/50

Capturing write up- good

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10. Unquenchable pursuit by sonjaebersole

Feedback- The cover and description are fine. The grammar needs a bit of polishing with proper punctuation and correct usage of phrases. The characterisation is okayish, it can be further improved. The storyline is interesting, but several details and norms need to be clarified, and the plot needs to be tighter. Overall, a nice read.

Grammar- 7.5/10

Spelling- 10/10

Book cover- 8/10

Story description- 8/10

Storyline- 7/10

Total- 40.5/50

Capturing write up- good

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*Drumrolls*

Top stories:

Second runner up :
Searching for chi (40/50)!

First runner up:
Unquenchable pursuit(40.5/50)!
And
The ground breakers (40.5/50)!

And finally the winners

First place- Just a sentence (46/50)

Second place- Purple blood (45/50)

Third place- Ayanda born of the storm (41/50)

Congratulations 🎊

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