The snake that'd kidnapped me had greenish-yellowish scales, with orangey diamond patterns, and a triangular head. Inside its mouth, though, everything was black, and although it was raining icy buckets, I was sweltering hot. I was terrified, to be honest. I was sure I'd be eaten. Then, roughly twenty seconds later, the grey sky became visible through the snake's mouth, and I quickly scrambled through, into a grassy meadow dotted with lilacs and daisies, and cold rain pouring all around. There, plain as day, were my saviors- three wolves.

The first was snowy white, with amber eyes. She had an aura that was far stronger than it should've been- I figured she must be pregnant.

The second was black, with brown eyes. He was stocky, with a strong aura of power- I supposed he was some sort of leader.

And the last was a commonly patterned wolf, with one green eye, and one blind eye. She was also powerful, but her aura was tamer, like she didn't want anyone to know.

The snake lay useless on the ground, dead; I was sure, though dead remains dead, that he'd come back and eat me.

The white she-wolf opened her mouth, and-somehow- spoke. "I am BrightEyes, and these are TrickleFern, and RouteNose. You must come with us!"

She ran off into the woods, and I struggled to keep up.
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As we entered what BrightEyes had called the Pack, my eyes widened. It was huge, and teeming with wolves. Soon, we arrived at a large fort-like thing.
"Wait right here and don't move." BrightEyes told me, "We will come fetch you when the time comes."

Well, it's still short, but at least it's better written. I'll probably come back and make it longer, once I finish the story (to some extent). So- TrickleFern, BrightEyes, and RouteNose. MWAHAHAHAH!!!
Later,
Echo
PS- Expect chapters on 6-14-16
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