Autumn @IronicallyGood
This is @IronicallyGood's OC!! SPECIAL THANKS TO THEM FOR THEIR OC BEING THE FIRST IN HERE!!!!!!! :D :D let's get started!!!!!
Name: Autumn
Pretty name!! :D
Age: 16 Dragon Years (idk the conversion hnn)
Good age!! A lot of Ocs(including a few of mine:/ ) are in the ages 7 and under age category!
Gender: Female
Slightly over used, doesn't affect grade
Tribe: SeasonWing (I'll put a tribe desc in a reply to save room)
Different! Never heard this one before!! Like the sound of it already!!
Appearance:SeasonWings are like RainWings in the sense that their scales change color, but it's seasonal (woah what a shock).
That's Awesome!!!
Their scales change gradually over time, and at the beginning/end of each season they slowly start to shift over, it's not instant. Winter colors- Whites, silvers and flecks of light LIGHT blue
Pretty!!!
Spring colors- Pastel green with light pink overscales like sakura blossoms, they fleck down Summer colors- Deep green with white/yellow patches that look like the sun shining through a forest Fall colors: Dark reds, oranges and yellows, yellow/green dotted on the legs like patches of dry grass As for the body shape, they are slimmer and taller than other dragons. They have long, curving horns that have tips that also change seasonally (take a wild guess what colors).
Never heard of that before either!!!!!!!
They have long, flowing manes instead of spikes, and have leaves growing out of their tails that wilt if the dragon is sick and die if the dragon does.
Nice way to tell if a dragon is sick!! Are they able to hide that they are sick or dying somehow? (Just wondering does not affect grade)
They have seasonal breath weapons that go in this order: Winter: Frostbreath Spring: Weak poison that develops into summer's poison Summer:Strong Poison Fall: Fire Royal
AWESOME!!!!!
dragons have faint-glowing leaf patterns on their wings. Only royalty can name their dragonets after seasons, everyone else has nature-themed names based on what season they were born in (Ex- Snowbank in winter, Sunflower in summer etc) while royal dragons are literally named the season. This means that the queen can only have 4 dragonets, and if 3 or all of them are male they will recieve name-changes and the queen will have more. If all the heirs are killed, the queen can have more dragonets. If the queen has more than 4 dragonets, then they have to mix the eggs with someone else's just in case she needs a backup heir. If you need anything else, lemmie know! Also, the book will be similar to what is shown at the start of the books, featuring all the tribes. This means that A. the cannon tribes don't exist and B. There's gonna be more! And no problem doing this, I love these!
Yay!! Cnat wait to read the book!
Taller and slimmer than most SeasonWings, auburn eyes and a longer mane. She keeps the fur on her head in a messy, effortless style. Leaf markings on her wings that glow ever so slightly from being royal
.Personality: Autumn is pretty nice, but has a short fuse.
Just a Little bit overused, but is that all she is like? Either hot tempered or nice?
She doesn't fight, but could prob win a rap battle.
XD Yay! Future Rap battle champion!!!!!!! Love that!!Who needs to win a gruesome death match when you can win a rap battle? I dpoubt that will win ypouthe title of Queen, but its a good try!
She tends to stay quieter during conversations, but if it's a topic she likes (like writing) she will talk and talk and talk until someone somehow changes the topic. She loves change and gets restless if everything's the same for a few weeks.
Nice! This is Different! A lot of OCs hate change and some even blow up over little changes
Abilities: Seasonal weapons, faint glow-in-the-dark leaf pattern on wings and can grow things easier.
Occupation: Princess, but is known as the tribe librarian.
Ooh! Princess librarian!
Residency: The SeasonWing palace, a room in the royal library build just for her.
Nice! A princess who lives in a library!
Family: Queen Spring, Princess Summer, King Oriole
Backstory: Being born into a royal family, Autumn became the family writer. Fast. She learned to write a month before she learned to read, so her first stories may have not made sense but STILL. Anyway, she helps out other dragons if she feels they deserve it, but being hot-headed can't really help out when you're in charge of a library in the fall. There was a time she got so mad, the palace was frozen over and they had to wait 'till summer so they could go back in. Let's just say, she had a pretty average life accept for going a bit... angry for a short time.
Where did the royal family stay while the palace was being thawed out?
Other: She was the one who wrote 'An Universal Guide to Dragons'The book about the different tribes with illustrations done by Summer.(That's my guidebook I'll be posting soon, it's not done yet!)
Yay!! Another book!!So, a princess Author Librarian? Interesting combo! Love it!
So... Time for the "good news bad news thing.. Leyte start with bad so you can hate me until you see the good news.. Okay?
Bad:
The 'hot tempered' personality is slightly over used and I would like to see a little more personality in there. Personalities are more complicated than just hot tempered and nice. I would also like to see a little more personal back story.
Good:
Seasonwings are new to me (Space wings and several others are extremely over used fan tribe name and all of them are completely different for example) tribe name really fits description, and I really love how they're scales change colors and their abilities slightly change during seasons too!!! I like how Autumn isn't a stuck up princess or a rebel like most royalty OCS are, and a princess librarian and Author is also really cool and New!!!!!Princess Autumn is a beautiful character!!!
Overall: 7/10
I really loved Autumn!!!! Im sorry I couldn't give you a 10, I really wanted to.. Autumn is a great dragon!!!!
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