Felinewings
Tribe name: FelineWings
Current ruler: Queen Donskoy
Other known royalty: King Lykoi, Princess Lioness, Princess Tiger, Prince Thorn and Prince Puma
How they're named: Named after cat species and jungly themes [How broad does the jungle-part theme extend? I noticed there was a prince named Thorn; and thorns don't neccesarily strike me as something jungle themed. So does that mean names can be vague? Like, would Bush be an workable name? Or even Plant? Even if they were to exist outside of a jungle, do the names still work?]
Diet: Omnivorous; mainly eat meat but when it's scarce they'll eat berries and other plants
Appearance: FelineWings range in size, [Since they range in size, what's the smallest/biggest size a felniewing has ever been recorded to be?] but their body shape is typically lean with thin tails. Short snouts and non-forked, bumpy pink tongues. On their heads, they have tiny, circular, smooth scales, but on the rest of their bodies they have fur that can be any length. In rare cases, instead of fur, a FelineWing will have the same scales as it's head on its body. [I image those are like hairless cats in a way?] Are able to dilate pupils and have whiskers behind nostrils. Their horns are short and sharp.[Where are the horns? Do they have ones down their spine like the canon tribes? If so, what shape are they?] Their ears look like those of a NightWing's. Sharp claws and cat-like noses. Medium-sized wings that make long-flight distances tough. They can be any color a cat can naturally be born as, and can have patterns such as spots, stripes, etc. EXTREMELY rarely, FelineWings can be unnatural cat colors.[What unnatural colors are we talking though?] Their eyes are also natural colors a cat can have for eyes, and like fur, can be oddly colored, but rarely. [So unnatural fur and eye colors are both rare. But how rare are we talking? if two rarely colored Felinewings were to reproduce, would the offspring have rare colors too?]
Abilities: Can leap very high like a cat, can see well in the dark, can meow, purr, chirp, and make other sounds cats can make, great sense of smell
Special abilities: Very rarely can have fire-breathing abilities. Like most tribes, can have animuses (idk the plural for animus)
Weaknesses: Most don't like water and get scared easily. Have delicate feet which can get hurt easily [Oh, so they have padded paws like cats do? or rough ones like dragons?]
Where they live: Live in a jungle on a huge island called Catus Island
Society/lifestyle: FelineWings only take care of their young for about a month before they leave them. The young stay together in a group like MudWings do, and come together with another litter to form a pride. Heirs will have to kill the ruler to claim their role- [How many children do mothers typically have per litter? They seem to be rather cat-like, so are they born like regular cats or hatched through a egg? What happens if a litter is born alone, and cannot come together with another? Who decides the leader of the two litters? Do they stay together after they grow up? How far -as a society- have they progressed? I'd also wonder their hunting methods and if -since they eat plants- they've started farming. Are there specifc foods they can/cannot have; and how do they deal with predators?]
Opinions on other tribes- [This part of the form is namely for if they live with the canon tribes. Since I don't know anything about the other fanwings; can't say much here]
CanineWings: scary, fierce tribe; should be avoided at all costs
HookWings: also bad luck as they're in an alliance with the CanineWings
BatWings: not bad, could probably make an alliance with them
BeautyWings: selfish, arrogant nuisances
VictoryWings: Very interesting dragons
SeasonWings: No opinion
[I would overall say that the Felinewings are a pretty good tribe; not over-powered with insane strengths and few weaknesses. They're very cat-like and seem to be well made. I just had alot of questions about their lives which can be cleared up with more detail. But otherwise, I'd say that nothing else really needs to be changed.]
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