For @six-clawsthesandwing

Firestorm
Nice name, I like it

Male
Don't see a lot of those

18
Nice, an adult. Don't  see to many of those

mix wings(get a random 2 abilities)
Is that fan-made or what? It isn't  canon and I would need tribe appearance for that.

red with yellow flashes
Sounds like the Flash, pretty. But... what flashes?

control and create fire and lightning
Cool, unusual, but still not canon

unidentified
What is unidentified? You need to say something like Name: Aurora Gender:Female and so on

this is long but slab,jade ,winglet, flash,blur,galaxy,canyon,phoenix,circuit
A) You need to capitalize it B) what are they (Parents, Cousins, or whatever) C) interesting names for dragons

none
None what? You need to state what these are, I'm having  trouble assuming

only thing done so far is burn down a dungeon
Ummm…? Details? Has he moved or breathed or even talked?

Does he have a backstory or a personality? You need more details and to state what this all is. I'd say Firestorm gets a 3.5/10 You need to work on him a lot.