Orthodox Rituals Destroy Lives🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
I know i have many stories& few os pending
But yesterday i came across a really old newspaper article& i felt to share the content with you
AvNeil- live in xyz village
Avni is single daughter of parents
Neil has 4brothers, all elder to him with vidyut being the eldest
(Im not mentioning names of other 3 bcz kisi ko ghanta farq nahi padta- sabka focus sirf AvNeil pe hi hoga🤣🤣🤣)
Ashwin& Amrita- avni's parents
Prateek &Prabhakar- fathers of neil& his brothers
Savitri-mother of neil& his brothers
Happy reading!
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Scene starts in evening when a house is shown- beautifully decorated with lighting& flowers all around everyone is enjoying except for one person who is actually trying to convince someone
A-maa mene dekh liya h
Am(confused)- kya dekh liya h?
A-yahi Ke baahar garden men ek ya do Nahi balki5 ladke aaye h
Am-haa
Yeh sach h-tumhari shaadi 5 ladkon Se Hone Wali h
A(crying)-lekin maa aapne& papa ne muje promise kia tha ke aap ese family men shaadi karaoge jisme max 2 bhai ho
Yaha to poore 5hai
Men 5bhaiyo ko kese....
Mujse nahi hoga maa
Plz ye shaadi cancel kardo
Avni's cheeks were now filled with tears
Am-avni tum acche se jaanti ho ke ye iss village ka rule h-ladki ki shaadi ek ghar ke saare bhaiyo se kari jati h
Ye pratha yaha sadiyo se chali aayi h& hum iske against nahi ja sakte
Aur ye ek well to do family h- tuje kabhi kisi cheez ki kami nahi hogi
Esa rishta bohot mushkil se milta h beta
A-par maa...
Am-avni no more arguments
Chal ab koi nakre mat kar& jaldi se tayyar hoga
Avni knew there was no escape- she couldnt run away from the location else her family will have to face taunts from relatives& guests& she didnt want to get her parents insulted
She ultimately gave up& got ready
Soon her cousin sisters took her to the backside of the house- where the wedding was going to happen
Usually when a girl moves towards the marriage mandap, she blushes in shyness
But avni's case was totally contrary- she had a blank expressions on her face
Amrita made her sit in the mandap, next to 5men who will legally turn into her husbands in few more mins
Avni silently did what the pandit said
She didnt realize which brother filled her hairline with sindoor& tied the nuptial chain around her neck- was it 1or all of them held the sindoor& nuptial chain before the ritual?
She didnt notice who held her hand to make her stand for the pheras& when the wedding got completed bcz there was no point thinking of all this
A lone tear slipped down her eye but sadly, nobody noticed it apart from neil
He understood the reason behind her blank face
Although he wanted to, but didnt wipe the tear bcz he knew avni would break down& end up crying terribly which will be followed by a scene& everyone will get the chance to do what they love the most- GOSSIPING, BADMOUTHING& JUDGING
He decided to talk to her later on
*****
Avni reached her in laws house& after performing few rituals, she was taken to her room
Soon, the eldest brother arrived& smirked while unbuttoning his sherwani
In no time, he pounced on avni like a beast- not thinking that it would be her first time so he should be a bit gentle
When she cried in pain, her covered her mouth with her hand& continued to just fulfill his physical hunger
When he left, avni was wincing in pain& her lower region was also burning
Before she could think of taking a shower to cool down her pain& the burning feeling, other 3brothers also came after a gap of hardly 15-20mins
*****
Few hrs later-
Finally neil came in the bedroom
He smiled& sat next to avni& lifted her veil slowly
But the sight in front of him made him sigh sadly- avni's face clearly showed that she was drained terribly& was trying hard to keep her eyes open
Her face used to bend down& then again lift up- like a spring was attached to her neck
Her jewelry wasnt even clasped- it was literally hanging on her body& could slip off any moment
It was obvious- she must be drained after fulfilling the desires of 4men& wouldve put on her jewelry& washed her face to look fresh every time bcz her makeup was smudged off
But now, her body had given up
All this clearly showed that she needed immediate rest
Neil went a bit closer& removed her jewelry& bangles slowly
He kept on side table
Now avni woke up- she still had to fulfill the desires of her husband
She untied the dori of her lehenga blouse& was about to unlock her blouse but neil stopped her hands midway
Avni thought neil wanted to do everything on his own so she removed her hands& shut her eyes on thinking of what was going to happen next but neil's next sentence made her open her eyes at once bcz apart from her drained expressions, neil had noticed something else too-which his 4brothers didnt
N-avni i know you are extremely tired but you need an immediate shower-
The bedsheet has multiple lumps of blood- almost at the same location
You might get an infection
Go- take a shower
Avni nodded& went in washroom with night dress
She took a long warm shower to relax herself
In the meantime, neil changed the bedsheet& put the previous in laundary
He sat on the edge of the bed& waited for avni
He could see that avni was damn sleepy by the way she walked
He immediately got up, picked her in bridal style& gently made her lay on bed
A(sleepy tone)-you...dont...dont wa...want to f...feel...me?
N-no
You need rest but before sleeping, plz apply this ointment in your lower area- it will prevent infection& reduce burning feel also
A(low voice)-i wot be able to get up again- i dont have anymore energy left
N-ok relax
I will go in washroom& freshen up- i too, cant sleep in this uncomfortable sherwani
In meantime you apply it &call me when you are done, ok?
Avni nodded
Soon she applied ointment &called neil out
He kept the tube on side table
N-sleep
Avni closed her eyes& in slept off in mere fraction of seconds while neil just sat beside her& starred at her angelic face
Unknowingly, his hand moved towards her hair& he started to run his hand through her long, silky hair
Avni snuggled into him in sleep
Neil smiled& after giving a peck on her forehead, he also exhausted himself to sleep
*****
Next day-
Sunrays peeped through the window, breaking neil's sleep
He squeezed his eyes to get adjusted to the bright sunlight
Neil lowered his gaze& found avni sleeping peacefully, clinging onto him tightly
He smiled& kissed her hair
Soon he got up& went to freshen up
*****
Dining table-
Savitri was serving bf to everyone when prateek spoke
P-savitri bahu kaha h?
S-subah se so hi rahi h maharani
Ek baar kitchen men help karne ke baare men bhi nahi socha hoga usne
Isiliye nahi uthi
Prateek got angry
P-ye kya baat hui?
Usse boldo ke esa nahi chalega
Wo bahu h- wesi hi rahe& beti banne ki koshish na kare
Neil had heard everything& he felt disgusted by the fact that his family intended to treat avni like a maid
But whom was he keeping expectations from?
They obviously wont understand that what the poor soul went through last night
V-ye toh accha h ke prabhakar papa yaha nahi h- sheher gaye h kaam se
Varna wo kitne strict h ye toh sab jaante h
Par pata nahi avni kyu nahi uthi
Other 3brother also agreed when suddenly neil came from behind
N-ye toh men aap 4se puchna chahta hu vidyut bhai ke avni kyu nahi uthi
V(angrily)-kya matlab h tera?
N-kal kya haalath kardi aap 4ne uss bechari ki?
Ek din bhi nahi rok sakte they kya aaplog khudko?
Ek ke baad ek bas toot pade uspe
Sa(angry)-neil!
Ye koi tareeka h apne bade bhai se baat karne ka?
N-toh aur kese baat karu men maa?
Aap 4toh nikal liye apne shauk poore karke
Ek baar bhi uss bechari ka socha?
Kya wo insaan nahi h?
V-teri baaton se lagta h ke kal wo itna thak gayi ke tera no. Aa hi nahi paya
Isiliye tu frustrated h(smirks)
Aur vaise bhi tu ghar baithke freelance job se kamata hi kitna hai 1mahine mein jo hume confront karra h?
Jitni Ham 4ki personal expenses hote h utne mein to teri 1mahine ki salary aati h (taunting tone)
Chota h abhi tu toh wohi reh
Zyada udhne ki koshish mat kar
Neil looked at his brothers in shame
He picked a plate, filled it with breakfast &took it to avni's room
He entered &smiled on seeing avni sleeping with cute pout on her face
He sat beside her& caressed her hair
N-avni get up
Subah ho gayi
Avni squeezed her eyes &finally opened them, only to witness neil with a plate of breakfast, sitting near her
She got up with A jolt on realising the blunder she had done
It was her first rasoi today& she didnt wake up on time
Neil understood what she was thinking& consoled her that he will look after the issue& she need not worry
N-abhi kesa feel ho raha h?
A(sighing)-better h lekin thoda dard abhi bhi h
N-abhi tum breakfast karo
Men dawai deta hu
Wo Khao& fresh hone ke baad ointment laga lena
Theek ho jayega
Avni's eyes welled up in tears
A- thank you
N-kis liye?
A-mera Itna Khayal rakhne ke liye
N(smiling)-you are welcome
Neil fed her breakfast& had it himself too
Avni looked at him with strange expressions- was he the brother of the same4 men who force themselves upon her last night?
After bf she went to freshen up& later on neil took her to her home for pag phera while savitri was taunting avni for not waking up early
N-men shaam ko lene aaunga
Take care
Avni smiled &nodded
*****
3weeks went by& avni became close to neil& shared everything with him bcz unlike the other 4brother, he wasnt behind her body- he wanted to be her friend before a husband
Any of the other4 came to her only at night bcz they handled their father's factories which were kinda outside the village
Whereas neil was in freelance profession so he worked from home itself
AvNeil got to know many things about eachother in such short time itself
All 4had forced themselves upon avni many times in past 3weeks but not neil- he cared about her comfort much more than his desires
*****
Few days later, midnight-
Neil entered avni's room to spend some personal time with her
Even if she wouldve slept, he would just lay beside her& stare at her lovingly- something he could never get bored of doing
But when he entered, he found her sitting on the corner of the bed, sniffing silently
He immediately went to her
N-avni?
Kya hua?
Why are you crying?
Plz batao
Avni lifted her face& neil's heart broke into pieces-
Her face was red due to crying, eyes were puffy& nose was red
He also noticed hand print on her left cheek which made him shocked
N-kab aur kisne kiya ye jaan?
A-vi...d...yut... ji ne
Wo kuch ghante pehle aaye they
Jab wo mere close aane lage toh mene unhe roka kyuki men zyada thaki hui hu
Par unhone nahi suni
Ultimately muje unhe apni exhaustion ka reason batana pada
Wo sunte hi unhone muje thappad maar dia
N-konsa reason?
Avni felt nervous on telling him about it
She feared he would also slap her
Whereas neil was becoming worried
N-batao na jaan
A-wo...mere...mere...din chal rahe h
It took neil a minute to understand what she meant
Then he immediately hugged her &avni ended up sobbing in his arms
A-unhone bola ke men impure hu ye mene pehle kyu nahi bataya
Mere kuch bolne se pehle hi unhone muje thappad mara& chale gaye& jab unke chote bhaiyo ne thappad ki awaaz suni, toh vidyut ji ne unko bhi bataya& bola mere paas na aaye
Unn sabne muje disgusted look dia
Neil felt ashamed on getting such sadist men as elder brothers
N-vidyut bhai ki taraf se men maafi maangta hu jaan
A-aap kyu Maafi maang rahe ho?
Isme aapki koi galti thodi na h
Neil fetched the ointment from drawer& started applying it on her cheek while she winced in pain at intervals
Few tears slipped down his eyes too on seeing her condition but he knew there was no point confronting his brothers because they wont understand any of avni's problems
N-now be a good girl& sleep
Avni opened her arms, indicating neil to hug her
Neil followed suit& they slept off peacefully
**Time lapse, 3months later***
It was midnight &avni was hugging neil while he was caressing her hair
A-thank you for everything neilu
Jab shaadi hui thi toh muje laga nahi tha ke men 5bhaiyo ke beech ji paungi
But you made it possible
Mere apne parents ne muje shaadi ke baad ek baar bhi baat nahi kari- shayad men unke liye ek burden thi jo unhone itne saalo tak kabhi nahi jataya
Par meri shaadi hote hi, unhone jese rishta hi tod dia ho
N- i know jaan
Ghar men bhi sabne tumhe use kia& mom ne bhi na jaane roz humare family status ke difference pe tumhe uncountable taunts mare
Par tumne kuch nahi kaha& chup chaap sab seh leti thi
Aur mere bhaiyo ne jese tumhe torture kiawo toh hadd hi thi
Aaye din wo tumhare saath...
Muje toh sochte hue bhi ghinn aari h
A-its ok neilu
Ab toh aadat hogyi h
Mere liye toh yehi kafi h ke you understood my situation which probably nobody else did
You gave me safe contraceptive pills everytime bcz if i got pregnant with baby of more than 1, i wont be able to bare the weight
I anyway get exhausted by the time they fulfill their desires
Neil felt helpless on seeing her condition
N-bachpan men mene ek shaadi attend kari thi toh mom se iss ajeeb ritual ka matlab pucha tha toh unhone brush off kardia ke bade hoke pata chal jayega
Mene bhi zyada nahi socha& chala gaya cousins ke sath phirse khelne
Par jab men bada hua& iss custom ka reason samaj aya, men bohot gussa tha
Jab shaadi ki baat shuru hui toh tension& gussa- dono aur badh gayi
Humesha ek hi darr rehta tha- kya haalath hogi uss ladki ki jiski shaadi hum 5se hogi
But sadly, mere bade bhaiyo ko koi fiqr nahi thi iss cheez ki
Bohot baar mann karta tha ke ye village kya- state hi chod du& bhaag jau
But i knew prabhakar& prateek papa have high contacts
Unn dono ko zyada time nahi lagta muje dhundhne men
Par mene ek cheez toh dimaag men baitha li thi-mere bhai apni wife ke sath kesa behave karenge i dont know
But men khudko uspe kabhi force nahi karunga
Mere liye tumhari consent important h- koi stupid desires nahi
Men jaanta tha ki tumhari kya haalath hogi raat ko- shaadi ke baad
And i felt really bad on seeing your condition avu
Isiliye uss raat mene tumhe sone ko bola
Avni looked at him with moist eyes
She hugged him tightly
A-thank you for understanding my condition
N(caressing her back)-sshhh
Ese rote nahi h
Avni wiped her tears& smiled, making neil smile back
N-thats my avu
A-neilu meri ek request puri karoge?
N-of course jaan
Bolo
A-i dont want to hurt your feelings but honestly speaking, tumhare baki 4 toh bas apni desire fulfill karke chale jaate h- kabhi koi pehle aata h toh kabhi baad men
Par sirf tum ho jo humesha last men aate ho taki mere sath time spend karo, mujse baat karo
You never touched me without my consent
Aur muje tumhare bina bilkul neend nahi aati- i love to cuddle you while sleeping
I know ke iss shaadi ko sirf 3months hi hue h
But kya hum yaha se bhaag nahi sakte?
Mujse ab aur nahi saha jata
Esa lAgta h men ek wife nahi balki pros...umm....
Neil didnt let her complete her sentence by sealing their lips together
This was the first time in 3months that neil had kissed her on her lips instead of forehead or cheeks
Avni was shocked initially but as neil sucked her lower lip, she started to respond& soon the room was filled with sound of smooches
After breaking the kiss, avni's cheeks had turned into beetroot shade which make neil smile
She was breathing heavily so he rubbed her back to calm her& then pulled her totally over himself
N-never say this again
I have a plan in mind
Suno
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A-ye possible hoga?
N-bilkul hoga jaan
Lekin ab bohot hogyi baatein
Tum bohot thak gayi hogi toh abhi so jao
Neil adjusted the A/C temperature, covered themselves with the duvet properly& gently patted avni's head to make her sleep
Avni smiled at his gestures& in next few minutes, she exhausted herself to sleep- securely caged in the arms of her man
*****
Few days later, midnight-
AvNeil sneaked out of the house with their luggage& other personal documents& left for railway station
Neil had told avni to pack her clothes in a suit case from the cupboard in installments because if anyone spot the cupboard totally empty all of a sudden, they might get suspicious
Neil destroyed the sims of their phones& threw in the nearby dustbin on their way to the station so that nobody is able to track them while avni gave him confused look
N-hum Delhi pahuch ke news nos. lenge Taki Koi hume trace na kar Paye
Unfortunetaly hamari families ne kabhi Humari nahi suni kyuki humare soch unke jese pichdi hui nahi h
A-haa
Par hum konsi train lene wale h?
N-New Delhi ke liye
Waha mera ek college friende apni wife ke sath rehta h
Wo humara rehne ka arrangement kar dega
*****
Station-
AvNeil reached their platform
N-avni abhi train nahi aayi h toh tumhe kuch khaane ya peene ke liye cahiye?
Tum yahi bench pe wait karna
Men le aaunga
A-tumhare alawa muje kuch nahi chahiye
Neil smiled at her& kissed her forehead, making avni blush
A-we are in public(shying)
Neil sat beside her& she rested her head on his chest
N-public men h toh kya hua?
Men apni hi wife se pyaar karra hu
Aur wese bhi aadhi raat h- bohot kam log h platform pe
Im pretty sure sab thake hue h-koi notice nahi karega
Avni smiled with tears which neil wiped gently
N-ab tumhare rone ke din gaye jaan
Bohot jhel liya tumne
Ab hum New Delhi jaake apni ek choti si duniya basayenge
A(smiling)-i love you
N-love you too
Soon the train arrived& they boarded it
They sat on thir seats when avni started to shiver slightly
Neil realised that the AC temperature was slightly low so he picked the bedsheet nearby& wrapped themselves with it
Avni snuggled into neil
N-so jao
Pahuchne men time lagega
A-and you?
N-men thodi der jagunga
A-no
You must be tired
You also sleep neilu
Avni commanded him like a kid which made neil smile
N-ok boss
*****
Next day-
AvNeil reached Delhi& neil's friend DD picked them from station
Soon they reached their building& boarded the lift
N-tera ghar issi building men h na?
DD-haa
Mene tere liye jo flat dekha h wo bhi mere hi floor pe h
N-ok
Accha muje landlord ka no. dede
Legal contract ready karna hoga
DD-haa sure
Acha 1more thing-instead of renting, chaho toh flat khareed bhi sakte ho
Landlord ne bola tha hes ready to sell also
N-ok
AvNeil entered the house- it was a 2bhk flat with a spacious joint living& dining room
N-a new life is ahead of us
A-yes
They shared a hug& started cleaning the dusty house
*****
1 yr later-
AvNeil had purchased the flat after few months of moving in
Neil's love, care& affect made avni forget the 3painful months she spent with his so called family
Hugs, cuddling& long kisses no longer remained awkward for avni- thanks to neil's over romantic nature
While neil was doing great at his job, avni joined a women organization which helps homeless women by giving job& shelter, saving women from domestic violence by disguising as residents in small bastis& saving women from becoming victims of orthodox rituals followed in villages
It was evening& avni was sitting in neil's lap in their balcony& both were having coffee
Neil suddenly remembered their initial days in Delhi
N-avu tumhe yaad h humein ek baar tumhare ek client se milne jana tha toh station pe kya hua tha?
A-haa
Platform pe rush hone se humara haath ek dusre se alag hogya
Men train men chadh gayi but jab tumhe aas paas nahi dekha toh call kia
Aur tab pata chala ke tum reh gaye
N-hmmm
Aur uske liye tum kitna freak out kar gayi thi
A-phir tumne bola ke next station pe utarke tumhara wait karu
N-aur jab men next train se pahucha, toh tumne muje tightly hug kia& tumhari aakhon men kitne mote mote aansu they wo muje aaj bhi yaad h
Tum muje chodne ko ready hi nahi thi
A(pouting)-toh kya karti men?
Muje sheher ke lifestyle ka koi idea nahi tha-pehli baar aayi thi men
N-aur isliye uss incident ke baad men extra careful hogya
Accha ek min uthna mere godh se
Avni got up
A-kya hua?
N-kuch nahi
Bas meri legs thoda sa thak gayi
Neil said this randomly but avni took it in the wrong way
A(angry)-tumhara matlab h ive gained weight?
N-arre mene esa kab kaha jaan?
A-pehle men jab tumhari lap pe baithi thi toh tum nahi thakte the
Par ab thak jaate ho matlab yehi h ke ive gained weight
Ab tum dekho men kya karti hu
Avni was about to hold him but neil got up in nick of moment& started running in the drawing room, while avni was chasing him
She was about to catch neil but her foot tripped& she shut her eyes in fear bcz was about to fall but a pair of muscular held her by her lower back
On not feeling any pain, avni opened her eyes& found neil holding her securely
She stood up& was about to go in their bedroom but neil stopped her by holding her wrist& pulled her closer, crashing their chests together
A(pouting)-neilu chodo na
N-nope
Neil moved back to the balcony& sat on the chair with avni fastened in his arms while avni faced the other side in anger
Neil started kissing her cheeks whereas avni still maintained the angry pout
N-jaan you misinterpreted my statement
Do you really think your weight would affect me?
I love you jaan
Avni finally faced him
A-sachi?
N-muchi
Avni smiled& they shared an eyelock
Their faces were damn close- if avni moved a bit closer, they will definitely end up in a kiss Avni closed her eyes& parted her lips slightly
Neil took it as a green signal& sealed their lips together
He sucked her lower lip while avni responded equally
A(between kiss)-neighbors will see
N-let them see
I dont care
I have full authority to romance my wife
Avni smiled& they continued their business- not bothering that their smooches might be audible to others
After 15mins of a passionate kiss, they finally broke off& both were breathing heavily
Avni hid her face in his chest, blushing profusely while rubbed her back& kissed her hair
A-i love you neilu
N-i love you too avu
With that, they lived happily ever after
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