Her Proposal
This is avni's confession on the cliff
Juhi is there but without any mishti drama
Also, ive made few additions in the confession scene
Happy reading
Avni was standing near the rayling of the cliff when neil arrived
N-avni tumne muje yaha kyu bulaya?
A-tumhe ye cliff yaad h neil?
Iss jagah se humari life ki bohot hi special yaad judi hui h
Yahi wo jagah h jaha se humari kahaani ki shuwat hui thi
She went on her knees& held the ring in her hands which he had purchased for her& he will make her wear it when she will express her emotions
A- Jab men pehli baar iss paani men giri thi toh akeli thi par jab doosri baar giri toh uss insaan ki bahon men thi jo ab mere jeene ki sabse badi wajah h-that you neil
Tumne mere saare zakhmon ko itni jaldi& itni aasani se bhar dia ke pta hi nahi chala
Neela maa ke baad tum wo pehle& aakhri insaan ho jisne mere surname ki fiqr nahi kari
Meri saari weaknesses ko andekha kar dia
Neil men jaanti hu ke men perfect nhi hu-
Shayad juhi jitni acchi nahi hu
Im a horrible cook
Im impulsive
I always have difficulty in expressing my emotions
Par men itna jaanti hu ke i love you neil- i love you with all my heart& soul
Muje pta bhi nahi chala ke kab muje tumhari aadat hogyi- par apne emotions ko samajne men bohot time laga dia na mene?
Im really sorry for it
Kya karti- I never had a boyfriend
Words like love, romance, inner feelings- they never existed in my dictionary
Mere liye toh feelings ka bas ek hi meaning tha- badla
Badla uss insaan se jisne mujse mera sab kuch cheen liya
Maa, papa, chota bhai-
Meri perfect family cheen li
Maut ke muh se baahar ayi bhi toh bas badle ki bhavna se
Dwm ko jail puhuchane& apne parents ko insaaf dilane ke alava meri life ka koi aur motive hi nahi tha until i met you
Men sochti thi ke duniya ke sare mard ashish mehta jese hote h- jo apni responsibilities se bhaagte h
Par tumne mera nazariya bilkul badal dia neil
Tumne hamesha apni responsibilities ko nibhaya h
Ashish mehta was a coward but you- you are always ready to take a stand
Ashish mehta kabhi bharose ke layak nahi tha but you are a man of words& principles neil- jo apne waado se peeche nahi hathta
Thank you for coming in my life
God forbid but agar kabhi tumhare saamne esi situation aye jab tumhe mere& juhi ke beech kisi ek ko choose karna pade ko kya tum plz muje choose karoge?
Kya tum muje accept karke meri happy family ka sapna pura karoge?
Throughout, neil didnt know what to say- he felt that he was the happiest man on earth rn
He felt as if he was on cloud 9
The moment he had been waiting for since so long had finally arrived- his wifey finally confessed her feelings to him
His silence was making avni nervous
She was scared if he would reject her- she had suffered many emotional injuries in life& didnt have the strength to handle another one
Neil still didnt say anything& made avni stand& simply took avni in a bone crushing hug, mumbling plenty of yes
They shared a long tight hug
After breaking the hug-
N-avni tumhe zara bhi idea nahi h ke mene iss moment ka kitni besabri se wait kia h-jab tum finally apni unn emotions ko express karogi jo tum mere liye feel karti ho
Aur haa- jaha tak sawaal h tumhe& juhi men se kisi ek ko choose karne ka toh men tumhe bta du ke ye situation kabhi nahi ayega kyuki juhi mera ateet thi aur tum mera aaj& aane wala kal ho
I agree ke mere past life men juhi ki bohot importance thi par ab mere dil& zindagi men sirf tum ho aur tumhari jagah koi nahi le sakta- juhi bhi nahi
She smiled at his honest confession
He kissed her forehead &she wrapped herself in his safe embrace
N(still hugging)- and yes, promise me ke abse tum mujse apni mann ki har baat share karogi- kuch nahi chupaogi
Apni har insecurity, har problem share karogi taki hum milke uska solution nikale
Men tumhe andar hi andar pareshaan hota hua nahi dekh sakta
A-i promise
N-well sorry wifey but its afternoon& mere pet men rabbits kabbaddi khel rahe h- im very hungry
(I mentioned rabbits bcz the copyright holder of word "mice" is chuhi na)😀😁😂
A-toh lets go home na
N-on second thoughts, iss khushi ko celebrate karna bhi toh important h
After all meri shy wifey ne finally apne dil ki baat mujse keh di h
Avni gave him a confused look
N-lets go
A-par kaha?
N-bohot jaldi pata chal jayega wifey
He held her hand, sat in car& drove off
*****
Neil stopped the car in front of a restraunt
They got out of the car& avni smiled
They entered the restraunt &get seated
A waiter gave them the menu cards& left
N(looking at the menu)-avni i know ke thoda sober sa restraunt h but tumhe bhi zyada fancy locations pasand nahi h& nearest yahi mila toh yahi aagya
A-its absolutely ok(smiles)
They place their orders& when the waiter left, neil noticed that avni was looking slightly low
N-wifey?
Avni moved her gaze back to neil
N-kya hua?
A-kuch bhi toh nahi
N-toh tum itni lost kyu lagri ho
Mene notice kia h- jabse hum yaha pahuche h tum dull lagri ho
Kahi aur chale?
A-nahi
This place is absolutely fine
He didnt pressurise her& thought of talking to her later on- when shes comfortable
*****
When they were on their way back, neil again noticed the dullness on avni's face
This strange behaviour was bothering him alot& he decided to ask her at that moment itself
He stopped the car in a corner of the road& the sudden break brought a lost avni out of her thoughts
N-avni, i cant see you so lost& silent
Plz tell me whats bothering you
Tumne thodi der pehle hi mujse promise kia tha ke tum apne dil ki har baat share karogi
Avni couldnt hold it anymore &finally broke her silence
She opened her seat belt& threw herself in his arms, startling him for a moment
He started caressing her back to sooth her breathing which was becoming heavy
Avni didnt break the hug
A-tumhe pta h mene tumse wo choose karne wali request kyu kari?
N-kyu?
A-kyuki muje darr lagra tha- ke kahi juhi tumhare zyada close hogyi toh tum muje chod doge ya mujse door hojaoge
Men sab kuch kar sakti hu but tumhe kisi aur ladki ke saath share karna ya khona afford nahi kar sakti
Tum sirf mere ho neil
I trust you& your love but i dont know when& how i became insecure
Few tears escaped her eyes
Neil immediately took her cold shivering hands into his warm ones
A-pta nahi muje kya hogya tha jo ye baat muje andar se dara rahi thi
N-sshhh
Bas
Now no more crying
He wiped her tears with his thumbs
A-im sorry
N-its absolutely ok jaan
Couples toh choti choti baaton pe argue karne lagte h
Tum bohot strong ho jo mere past ko sirf apni nazron ke saamne dekh bhi rahi ho& uske saath ek hi chhat ke neeche reh rahi ho
Koi aur ladki hoti toh bina puri baat sune ya samjhe hi ghar chodke chali jati
You are way more strong than anyone else& im proud of you
Ese circumstances men toh ye darr ya insecurity kisi ko bhi pareshaan kar saktai h
But i promise you- mere ateet ka asar kabhi bhi mere aaj ya aane wale kal pe nahi padega
Mujpe sirf& sirf tumhara haq h
A-i love you neil
Plz muje chodke kabhi mat jana
N-tum chahogi tab bhi nahi
And i love you too(kissing her hair)
With hands interwined together, they soon return home
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