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IM KIDDING, IM KIDDING, OKAY?
Anyway, something that annoys me is the overuse of bolding or italicizing. Bolding causes the text to become darker than the surrounding text. Bolding is most commonly used to emphasize certain words or the like. Italicizing is just a script and is used to mark something that was different from the rest, for example: a dream scene or something of the like.
When the author asks for constructive criticism and you give them some.
Then like five minutes later: "I NEVER ASKED ANYONE TO CRITIQUE MY WONDERFUL BEAUTIFUL STORY YOU KNOW!"
Wow, yeah, thanks. After all that trouble I went through to critique it.
>.<
Now that I think about it, the best stories I've read on here are usually the ones with less glamorous covers than the top books in each genre have. AND YOU KNOW WHAT? THOSE BOOKS ARE THE MOST AMAZING THINGS I'VE EVER READ WHILE HALF OF THE TIME I READ "WHAT'S HOT" BOOKS, I'M MISLED BY THE COVER AND MILLIONS COMMENTS AND IT ENDS UP BEING A REALLY BAD STORY.
>.<
Meet Kimmy Annabel Kardashun (<- see, I changed it. Now you can't tell me to back off Kim Kardashian, because that is obviously not her), the nerd of stereotype high school. Kim has but one friend, extra perky, really good with makeup Jordonoa Harry Styles! She gets good grades in every subject and has studied algebra since she was in kg. But I almost forgot, she also has another friend named Lucas who she hasn't seen in 15 years. But he is due to come back home this summer with a new girlfriend! But of course, Kimmy gets jealous because she's been in love with Lucas forever.
Meet Lucas Johnson, the bad boy of Stereotype high! He wears leather jackets and black everything and now that I think about it, he's actually goth!
I...
I...
And where in the world are the books about teenagers dealing with normal things that do not- I repeat- NOT include romance. Because to be honest, how many parents let their twelve year old date somebody? And yeah, sometimes the tween will date somebody even if they're not supposed to but not everyone is interested in dating.
And the MC who is somehow fat but at the same time battling anorexia and has a lot of confidence but at the same has low esteem...
I never knew one person could go through all of that. I mean, they can, but not in the same period of time... right? Or am I just delusional? (I'm probably just delusional if I'm going to be honest here)
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