So I start a lot of comics and mangas that I never finish but this story seemed promising even if I never will finish it so I drew up a quick design for the main character.

The story plot is basically a knight who fails to protect the princess and flees the country only to be taken in by a new royal family, after that, a bunch of dramatic stupid stuff happens with a fairly happy ending.

I don't want to give away too many spoilers but I have 25 pages fully planned.

It takes me a while to finish one page and I only have 3 done so far but it is something I want to keep working on. When I finish enough of it I might make a new story and post it fully on there.

please give me some critiques either about the plot line or the art because god knows I'm not a writer unlike most of my friends on here ;-;

I think i need to redo some of the faces but as you can probably tell, that is basically the first page of the manga.

I spent a week learning how to draw armour and to create my own however it's one of the aspects I love about Corinne

p.s its read right to left, sorry for being confusing ;''