oka im back! i saw the good reviews some ppl gave me and i wnated to come back. Also my friend JazzPaw is helping wit the chapters she healped me with the first tow but after that she didnt' have internte but hse got it back now. :DDDDDDDDD (If Jazzpaw was helping with the first two chapters,it didn't show.Either that or you both have terrible grammar.)

Then StarKit wock up and she was in the forest.

"Mew" she said becuse the sould'nt talk becuse the was a kit. (Only say mew in live action RPs!)

"Hello kitty" said her mother and StarKit lookd up.

Her mother... was HolyLeaf!"

"t!" said SatrKit. (She literally said 't') She lokce around to see whar she was.

"Were in the Donderclan camp" (DonderClan...?) said HolyLeaf "oh look here comes yourfather now!"

Into the nursey came... TigerSar! (So Goldenflower ceases to exist.Got it.)

StarKit new ther was soemthing she should no about TiggerStar but she didnt know wat.

"Thass your daddy TiggerStar!" said HolyLef. (They don't know the term 'daddy')

"I no that nam" though StarGit but she could thing about it becuse HolyLeaf said "Their are other kits out there go aly with them I have to takl to TigerSar in peace/ (Go ally with the others kits,Buttkit!)

StarKit wnet out into the clering and the cats wer stnding over the body of StarStar. (She finally accepts it) StarKit locked arund to see who els was in the clring. Then she saw RedPaw and lakePool sitting by the side sad'y with ther tals line.d.

"I thught StarStar tild you to stop bein plebian?" (Yes,Starkit.StarStar said that you cannot be a Roman peasant.) saud StarKit speking her firt sors. (How does this reincarnation remember everything from her past?)

"How would yoyu no" said LakePawl gettin defend. "Yur just a kit!"

"Your rigt" (Lakepaw is rigged.) said StarKit "how do U no?"

"Your HolylEaf's kid right?" ekd RedPaw. "I think Book and StormFur also had a kit, I think his name is AshKit." (Why would you name a cat Book?Cats don't even know what books are.They also don't know the word 'kid'.)

"Yuou should go see him" said JayFethr. StarKit new ther was sumthing familr about him to but she could't remembr what!1!1!1

"Yse I will thanz" relld. StarKit and she went bok to the nursry. She saw AshJit but she dint get to takl to him becuse then ther ewas a yell from abobe the camp. "HAHA LAQWL" yelld a locked up. (Did a lock just say Lawl...?) On on sid she saw YellowFagn (Yellowflag) BrambleCawl, (Bramblecall) LeafPolo, Wiit Storm (Wiistorm)and BlueStra (Bluestraw)and on the other were HolyLeaf and TigerStar!

  "Its a war betwen Starcaln and the Dark Forest!" said LinoBlaze and then... StarKit realeid... her mom and dad... wee EVUL!