(There are helicopters here?If there are,take away Stargleam please)

StarGlam (You are not glamorous) marced ofer too RedPaw and LakePaw (THEY.ARE.DEAD) she looked angrily. "WhT DID I JUTS SAY?/" she esked. (Did she say forward slash?) "The elfenth commonment is NO BEING GAY!11 (That just applies to toms!Those condiments never said anything about being lesbian!)

"But I love her!1" said LakePol.(a/n. EW!11 THIS IS DIGUSTING) (SO WHY ARE YOU FREAKING WRITING IT FOR STARCLAN'S SAKE?!)

"But its agant the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. She wanet over and thurst herslef betwen them. "Do you WANT to go the dark foret?"

"Yes?" ansed RedPaw. (You would be better off there anyway)

"No you dont" said StarGleam "it'sa relly horribld place." I kno, Ive been their!"

Were sory said RedPaw and lakePolw. (They don't ask about how Starbutt got to the DF?) They locked sadly. "We wont do it agan." (NO BE THE REBELS!!)

"I hope not" said StarGlame turng around and walkin back to FireStar. (And NOW he comes back,after all the fighting!Where have YOU been,you dumb coward?) "We have to show this to the rets off the calns.

"ok said FireStar" "we should go to the Gathern."

"If we go to the Gathern then I can shoe off (??) the commendments to the other claans1" gagged StarGlame happ;y. (No one likes a show-off,ESPECIALLY not a Mary-Sue that shows off) "Cmon lets go!" She ran of not wating fro any other cat and then she was at the Gathern! (She has abnormally fast legs.Enough said)

"ATENSION ALL CATS" she yelled lepping to the HighRock. ? (You can't do that!And the cats are ALREADY THERE?!?) "I NEDD YOU'RE ATTENSION I HAVE AN ANNOUNCER" (Where is he/she then?)

"Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!"

"Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" (You SHOULDN'T be here tbh) "I have the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commons ot to the other calns and theny all bowed down to her. Thank you for teling use SarkGleam they said happly." "We sont sin again!" (PLEASE.SIN.AGAIN.BE.THE.FREAKING.REBELS!!)

"God" (They are officially Christians/Catholics) said StarGleam she jumped form the HighRoke. She saw FireStar cumin threw the crowed towed jer. "StarGlame you are a much beter cat then me at this1 you should be letter. (WHAT?!ARE YOU CRAZY?!?!DON'T LET THIS MARY SUE TAKE OVER YOUR CLAN!!) Im not deid so ill go join the eldlers insted!" (NO!!STARCLAN'S SAKE DON'T DO IT FIRESTAR STARCLAN CAN'T ALLOW THIS!!) he said and he tuched his noise to StarGleams. (Where did Firestar get the noise?) "You have to go to the MonStone (Wait...but this is set after Sunset!!The Clans are at the lakes by now!!DARKROSES WHY YOU SO STOOPID) today to go get your nien lives. Ill go with you and so will JayFather." (Firestar you don't even need to go with her!Unless you're planning to kill her before she can get her nine lives.)

"Kawaii" (*pulls out knife*) said StarGlema happly. They left the Gathern and all the cats were cherring for her, (They can't just leave the Gathering like that!!)

So hod u guys lik eit? (As usual,no.Seriously has anybody died after reading this? T_T) it wass so didsuting 2 rite the gya part. (THEN DON'T WRITE IT THEN!!)HBut thigs are guna be better no inteh clams! (No more clams,guys.If you like eating clams,you're not getting anymore.) Also if ur a bad reveiwer u dont belive in Gosh (I'd punch this person if I could.JUST BECAUSE SOMEONE REVIEWS BAD DOESN'T MEAN THEY DON'T BELIEVE IN GOD!!!!) ull go 2 hekc. ('Heck' is a place?)  thx guys for the god reveis. ! (I doubt anyone was actually reviewing good)