(Wait...is this Chapter one or the prologue?I'm confused)

  The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. (Good grammar so far)

"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." (I WONDER WHAT IT COULD MEAN .O.)

"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. (Hmm you don't say) "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. (I thought the Three did.Are they suddenly not special anymore?) "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. (No you should just keep this to yourself even though it could end up saving the forest.OF COURSE YOU SHOULD TELL HIM!!) "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."

She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. (So close.It was almost 100% grammar-perfect...)

did u like it? plz tell me in urm review!  (...Urm?)

Alright,in the case of grammar,it was actually pretty good up until 'PROPHECY'.As for the actual plot so far,it's too obvious.I mean,come on!Anybody could see that Starkit is OBVIOUSLY going to destroy Tigerstar and Hollyleaf.Although why is Hollyleaf evil?She's addicted to the warrior code.Doesn't make any sense.

I think the plot (or at least the prophecy) could use some serious editing.Seriously guys,obvious prophecies should be a crime.

#obviouspropheciesareacrime

~Webkinzluver5