hokkyleaf RUNNING TOWERED HER. but a StarKlan cat named Bublesfor (BUBBLEFUR JOINED THE BOOK WHAT IS THIS THIS IS ILLUMINATI) jumped infront of her screamign NPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP. (NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE) She jumped in ftorn of her scremaign and HolyLeaf hit him insted!1!1! He died.

StarGlean woudl have ben really upset but her kits were coming. She almost creamed out in paun but she wais a string brave tac and so she didnt. (OF COURSE,only the all mighty and wonderful Stargleam can keep herself from screaming when giving birth!) It hirt allot. Dhere was alot of piano in her stomich AND SUDENLY TTHERE WAS BLOOD EVERYWERE111!1! (So graphic)SHE LOOKED DOWN AND THEIR was BRAKE in her stomchi. (There was a car brake in her stomach? XD) Hillyleaf was finished with bubbleFur (YUP IT'S BUBBLEFUR FROM WFE) so she was cuming tword her agein.

"NOOOOOOOOO STARGLEAM WHALED." (sTARGLEAM TURNED INTO A WHALE) But just as HOlyLeaf was about to hit her..... IT WAS BLUESTAR! Starglem wtchad in ANGR (sTargleam watched in ANGER!!!!) as BlueStat nocked Hollyleaf over and she put her claws in her throt. She made HoluLeaf unconsece. But be4 HolyLeaf went blak she svratched BlueStar"s! There was red bloud comiming from her chest!111

"I love you JazzPaw I lways have." (WHAT) iad blueStar when she deid. BLEUSTAR NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" said GleamStare!

She was sad. And jhe hurt from her was going to be so HRAD!11! but looking at BleStars body filled her with GOPE. So she pushed. (How does looking at a dead corpse bring hope?)

AND THE KITS CAME OUT!111!1! (SUCH DETAIL SUCH EMOTION SUCH-I don't even wanna deal with this anymore)

You flameas shoudl stopa beig so mean!1111!11! :(((((((((( dont you know how sda i am rite now? (I honestly wouldn't know given how awful and headache inducing your writing is) i am going throguhg a rly togh time and if i wasnt a christen I woud b so mad at you right now11111!1111!111! (Even a Christan can feel the emotion anger)