I'm not even sure what 'shrakking' was supposed to be.

okay guy I know its een a wile sinse my last chapta, but no I have somethin to say on th subgect! a few weks ago, jazzy intoduce me to something calld SLASH. At firt I didnt liek it so much but then since I new it exited and since i puberty I finaly admtted to myslef that I was...A LESBIAN!1!1!1111 (Wait...what?!So this entire time the author was actually a lesbian and yet she was discriminating against them?...What?I just can't even comprehend this) I men i didnt want to admit it first but ten i realizd that its not god to hide my felings. I men I now i usd to be a homophone (The author used to have two words that sounded the same but had different meanings) but evn thoh im not hapy about having to kno this i know its for the bet. I was awy for soooo log becuase i had to realse tat and aslo i was potsging on the OFICAL FORM. but everone their is a stanist!1!1111!1! (So people on this 'official form' worship Stan Pines) so i letf. and btw i cnat bleive those stupid at dleteed my sotyr!111! :((((( there so mean i mean wat did i do to derseve this? (There are a number of a things.) But anywa here is the chapte.

Now that she remebred StarPaw ran ack to the camp with anew goll. She wanted to tll evyrbody who she RELLY WAS. Sh got bck ther and past RedPaw and lakePool on there way otu.

"Wher are you gong?" StarPaw questin.

"Were going to Stainclan" repelled RedPaw. (A Clan full of stains.)

"But why?" sekd StarPaw. "Bein gay isnt a sin anymro!" She whaled afte rhtem. (Even after you told everyone it was a sin about 3258756 times?)

"it isn't said LakePaw but you said it was!" (And yet you believe her!)

"I kno" saed StarApw "But ive found out abut SLASH. Infact I've relaed that I LOVE JAZZPA.E." (*bangs head against desk and dies of confusion*)

"omg relly?" esked RedFur cause she culdtny belief it. (Me neither.)"but were still gong to Stinclan, becase wer also ATHIET"." (JOIN THE REBELS REDFUR!!)

"NO." StarPaw muttered. "you cant goo! Satinclan is not the place for you. (<-----THAT SENTENCE WAS *almost* COMPLETELY PERFECT THIS IS A MILESTONE!!) I shuld proly go and call hawkFrost and AshFit back beause they can be ga nwo! Oh and FlamePelt can come back to. (When did Flamepelt ever leave?)

"We;l go tel them" saidRedufr and she left with LakePaw. The StaRgleam wen back to tamp and wen she got thair she jumped o the HighLedRock.

"ATTENSION ALL CATA OF THUNDERCLAN
SHE YELeld I HAVE AN ANOUCNEMTN.

The cats . "What is it StarSpaw theu asked (Are they seriously just letting her do that?)

"I HAVE A CONFESSN" SHE YELLD "I...AM...STARSTAR!11!11!111111111!" (THE STARSTAR REVOLUTION HAS BEGUN!!)

No words.None.