SatrPaw (...what) rnan away she aws tears weire sterawming down her nick. WHY WAS HERE LEAF SO BADD?1!1?111/?12 (I don't know why your leaf is bad,so don't ask me) Everyone ated her1! (Since when does anybody hate her?Everyone has pretty much loved her.Stargleam or Starpaw or whatever her dumb name is now is just being dramatic) all ehr family nad frineds were DEED!1!1 (Hmm...well Jayfeather magically resurrected even after being killed by his sister,Dawnsparkle was never dead,I think Firestar and Sandstorm are still around,Lionblaze is dead,Jazzsong or Jazzstar is alive,so...the majority of her family and friends are still alive.Once again,this Mary Sue is being dramatic.) shed gone throu so much and now not even JAXPAW her BSET FIREND would hepl here!11? (...What?)

She flet her kits move in side her. she alreayd loved them s o much. But it was hard becuase she loved JazzStae! Her life was so TREIBL RITE NOW. (Or you're just being dramatic) Sudenly a starlcna cat came down from the sjy. It was..... SLIVERSTREAM!1 (Silverstream was in RC...) "dont worry GleamStap" (StarClan doesn't even know her real name) said the silverstream! Itwall all be ok in the nd youll sef.

"i dnot know how it can be." she said. "it will." Epxlinad Silberstream.

"I HAVE KITS SILVERSDREAM! IKTS!11!1" SPARKLED STARGLEAM. (How does one sparkle)

O know said StaSilverStream. "but ive ben in yoru place before iknown what it fells like,' she liked StarkIts fourhead. (Why does Silverstream like Stargleam's forehead?) then she luf.

StarTit snifed. She had 2 get better. For her KTIS. SHHE START wwalking awy into the forest.

I DONT KNOW IF I BEABLE TO UDATE MCUH RIHTE NWO IM SO SADDDDDDDDDDDD T-T (Translation:I DON'T KNOW IF I BE ABLE TO UPDATE MUCH RIGHT NOW I'M SO SADDDDDDDDDDDD T-T)