(Did anybody else realize we didn't actually learn ANY truth in the last chapter? >:T Is the author just stupidly naming chapters now?) 

But suddenly as SatyrGleam was leafing theri was a nose from the bushs and Shadwclan spring out!2! (They skipped the Gathering?) their was TailPoppy (Some cat named their kit Tailkit?) LittleCold, (That's mean) RedStrom OwlPad (Just...) SchorcWind (there from the Alliances I mad them warrior they don apear in the books) (What books?) and CeaderGeart, and Twanypelt & RustFur, all of BlacStars bets warriors. (The warriors Blackstars made bets on c:)StarGleams malting orange (HER EYES WERE FREAKING RAINBOW!!) swammed with suprise. (Did her eyes fall out of their sockets now?)What ere they going t do? "StarGlaw" said Blackstar sadly. "U cant becomed leader then it will be inblossble for us to have kitsss!" jhe said. (FOR GOD'S SAKE I'M GOING TO KILL EVERY CHARACTER THAT'S IN THIS DUMB BOOK!!)

"Ive got to do BlackSrar its my detsiny." You cant fihtg feat.' (What?!)

"No!" he meowled. "I don't want to loose you!" "Its oky" sad FireHeart (I guess Firestar already got downgraded) he was called that new sinch he wasnt ladder, he hadnt leafed yeat. "Ya" sad GaryStripe (GARY!!Also,where did Graystripe come from?!) "we lofe her to"

"ok" sad BlackStar sadly. They wacked away. StarGlem was glad, she had anew love. (BLACKSTAR LOVED YOU SINCE YOU WERE A FREAKING APPRENTICE!!) Se didnot want 2 dell with this wright now.

StarGleam mead LoinBalze (Loinballs) her depudy he take the clkan back to camp. Her and JayFeather and FireStar walked to the MoonPool. "I cant belive it sadi StrGleam. "I can." Said JayFeater he was smelling StarPaw(downgrade also WHY JAYFEATHER!!) almots gasped shed never seen her father smiel befour! "Your a grate (Stargleam is making unpleasant rasping noises) leddar StarGleam ive always none since the first day I saw yo." (SHE DOESN'T EVEN HAVE HER NINE LIVES YET!!)

"Relly." She aksed. "Relay," (Relay race! :D) he said. She smiled to for teh firts time in a log time she was really happy! (When AREN'T you happy? =_=) Shed had someny toms chating after her (The toms all fall for the shed) but now this would be Oka!

They were closed to the MoonSnot now. (The Moonstone has a nose!!) StarGleam was startig to gut a litel nervis. Wha if starClan didnt like her? (I think they despise her with every fiber in their bodies)

They went ot the MoonPolo. (Wait...are we in horse polo now?) It was a shinny; rotund poll. (Everyone come over to rotund poll!) StarGlean had never sen enythin so buetifly inner life befor. "im so produ of you," said FireTar (I'm not >:C)his gaze tinkling. (<---I can't even) StarGleap purSmiled and liked the warter. (So she likes the water...also,I thought this was the Moonstone?!)

It was dark! StarGel am opened erh eyes and she was in a froset. Then there weas lots of stars. 'like me' she thoguth lokoing at the star in her foreheed. (How did she even GET that star?) Then they shinned brighter and there were cats! lost of cats and they were ver starry. Starclab!1!11!

"Are ou reedy" (I'm not a reed) shouted on of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit (double downgrade she can't become leader guys! :D Wait...I realized something...SHE WAS NEVER DEPUTY AND NEVER HAD ONE APPRENTICE!!) whe was turbling with exitmente!

"ong (eggnog) of them came up. It was a blue cat. 'Bullstar' (namegrade also the WC have never seen bulls) wispered StarGleam ahstruck. "With this live I gave you liedership (So Star has the ability to lie in her leadership c:) said BleuStar puttinger noise to StarGleams. It hurtd! (Of course it hurt!There's noise being to you!) BlueStar wakled away StarGleam wandered ho muck more of this she cold tack (You can't  tack leadership lives) it hurt so much she terbled.

"With this life I give you corrage" said YellowFag storling up to StarPleam. It hurted like neddles!1 (I just..)

BambleCalw came nex. (Since when was he dead?!) He put his mose on StarGleam's forehed. (No more nose touching?) It hurt lick TiggerSTars class! (So I guess being taught by Tigerstar in his class was painful)

WithStorm stambled over next. "Woth this lift. I give you strenth. Us it well to pertect your clan." (Make your Clan perfect?Ok c:)

LeaveWind cam on to her. (Who's Leavewind...?) "Wit this life i give u nolledge." It hurt like fier!1 (No,this random cat is giving you a college scholarship so you can learn how to NOT be a Mary Sue.Take darkroses with you so that way she can learn Proper English 101.)

She god a liff rom BundleFace form motherlinest a life from TailStar (Namegrade.Also,TALLSTAR IS FROM WINDCLAN!!) for qiickness, & a life for StoneFur (HE'S RIVERCLAN!!Although technically he's half ThunderClan...) for bravvery. She was shacking she didn nok if she cold mack it!

And then... frorm the cord.... came.... A LINO!1!11!1 (A limo?A dino?)

SatrGleam GASP! "This is ThunderStar" mowed TallStar. He was the first ledder of Thunerclan! OR it was called LoinClan." (Thunderstar of LoinClan)

StarPaw coudnt breath? She was so exited and so onered! "I cat beliv its relly you ThungerStar (Hungerstar,leader of Panem) she said in ah. "Its meh" said the lion. (Thunder wasn't a lion.Although this was technically before DOTC) He toched his mastiff nose (He has the nose of a Mastiff.Now we know why TC uses abilities related to dogs) to her nose and the pan was worst than ever befor! (Where'd the pan come from) StarGleam thougth she would de! (Too bad she won't) "With his life I give o HEAR. (The power to hear the commenters on how Mary Sue you are!Brilliant,Thunderstar!) You have a realy strong heat bfour but is even stornger now, thank you for giving comandaments (condiments) to the Calns. Wath would Starclan

doo witouth you (Gee,I don't know;you'd probably be celebrating the fact that you don't have to deal with butthole named Stargleam that everyone wishes is dead.But that's just a theory) Now I will giv you a namr."

"Wat!" shotud StarGleam ass he opened his moth. "I donk want my bame to be StarStar that would be stuped! (Dang it!We were all hoping for that!Thanks a lot,you butthole!) I want to be called GleamStsr!" (Can she seriously just DO THAT?!)

"Fery well" said LionStar doping his head he wold lisent to StarGkeam she was specal. (Great.Now StarClan has lost it.) I now pronunce you..... GLEAMSTAR!'

Butt (yes you are all butts) as the cats begun to cherr, there was a dankness! The darknest (There's a dark birds' nest!) swolled everything! She could small BLODO! Suddenly TigerStar and HolyLeaf were there! In her vishon! She sa them tacking over the clans and ther was an arm of rogues and cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was a cat suruonded by a godlen lite!1!1! It was... HACKFROST! He made all the bad stuff disapare. (WHAT?!THIS IS THE WORST VISION EVER!)

"MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!11!1!1!11!" yelled StarGleamStar (So her name is now Stargleamstar.And she literally mooed like a cow.) walking up. (To what?) She juts culdnt be in loe with HawkForest she just could!11!1!11! (So you CAN be in love with him or not?Also,why are you trying to take away Ivypool's mate?!)