(THE SARK OF THE SLOUGH NEVER DIED!!)

"NO!" yewled StarKit. (downgrade) She run after TigerClaw. (downgrade) but he was to fat. (If he's too fat,how come you can't catch up to him?Or are you really slow?Also,don't call Tiggerstar fat!)She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so tried so sad, Teres begun to role down her face: her sitser was deed and tigerstar had ExcapeD!

"y am I so ulsess?/?/' she dsked. (Everyone has been asking this) "why couldnt i kill her?" (Do you mean Hollyleaf is Tigerstar suddenly a she-cat?) "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" SHE SAID JUMPED.

It juts me. " said JayWing (Jaywing is back y'all) waking to bedside her. "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." (In the Great Battle,spirit cats could be killed twice!Just ask Spottedleaf,Snowtuft,etc.!) "what" said StarGleam "What dlo you men."

"hes in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do I do thouth starGeam.

"we can go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." (Jayfeather is physic.Also,WHY ARE YOU TAKING YOUR DAUGHTER TO THE DARK FOREST?!) Mewled Jayfeater. "tack me their!" sad StarGleam. (Yes,Stargleam.We are going to tack your tail to a tree in the Sark Forest)

She slepped and then they were in the Fark Forest. (Fark.Wow.) It was dark. (Duh .-.) Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and it wass heard to see. They herd voices! (Wait...they herded the voices into a coral or...?) It wass TiggerStar!

"ok tjen well kell her ND invade Thundercaln" he was said. (You could invade TC FIRST and THEN kill Stargleam!)"WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw (downgrade) she jumped at him. she was aboot (ABORT ABORT!!) to hit him when BlackStripe (It's DARKstripe) was there! "TIGERSAR WATCH OUT" said BlackStrip. TierStar loocked at her and he clawed her. It wasnt fare!

StarGleam fell to the ground (She's either a)a drama queen or b)super weak now) blood was cuming from a wand on her sholder. (She's a wizard now!)It was a lot of red blod. HawekFrost Looked at her. She was so buetiful so kawai, (NOOOO!!!I don't ship the couple Hawk XIvy,BUT IT'S WAY BETTER THAN THIS *and Twilight*) he was thought just like FirStar. He loved her. He had to save her. (Stupid "love at first sight" cliche)

He jumped in TiggerStar! He bit him! But it wa s to lat. StarPaw (downgrade)was dyeing. (HALLELUJAH!) "it was turning balkc. " (What's turning black?) I love you seh said as she did. (WHAT?!I THOUGHT YOU LOVED FIRESTAR AND GRAYSTRIPE!Or technically Firestar)

AND THEN STARGLEAM WAS DIED!11!111!11111!1!11!  (HALLELUJAH LET'S CELEBRATE GUYS :DDDDD)