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preeta and karan both had a very nice peaceful sleep after days or say years....one side karan was making plans to compensate the hurt he has given to his bajarbatti...while this side preeta decided to talk to sarla about karan's situation to get help but was fickle minded whether to talk  to her or not...finally she decided she wouldn't keep such matters out of her reach.....

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as usual preeta woke up at 6am....while shrishty shouted at her...

shrishty : arey kya yaar preeta.....kal itna drama hua...aaj sunday hi toh hai...so ja eri maa...aur mujhe bhi sone de...pata nahi kaha say karida uss alarm ko...uska antim sanskar mere haaton se hi hoga...

preeta : shrishty tu kitna bolti hai....aaj mujhe maa se bahut zaroori baat karna hai...mein yaha tension mein hoon aur tu mera subah subah sar mat kha..plss...so ja...mein ja rahi hoon..

shrishty : arey itna tension kyu??tu to tehre maa ki favourite...laadli....aur mein jhalli....maa teri har baat maan leti hai...

preeta : woh to hai magar

shrishty : waise itna zaroori kya hai ki...tu inti tensed hai...sunday ko bhi mujhe itna tang kar rahi hai??

preeta : abh..woh kuch nahi

<shrishty made a pouting face...>

shrishty : abh tu mujhse bhi baate chupati hai...haa mein kaun hoon.....kya lagti hoon....yaha toh koi mujhse pyaar nahi karta....kya kare,,,hey bhagwaan mujhe is bepyaar zindagi se mukti dilado!!

preeta : hey ram!! accha batati hoon...woh karan ke baare mein kuch batana tha....gussa mat ho please...woh waisa nahi hai...mein apni bajarbattu ko jaanti hoon...please mera yakeen kar....usse hamari zaroorat hai....agar tujhe bhi jaanna hai tho jaldi ready ho aur neeche chal....mein chal rahi hoon...

saying this preeta freshened up and went to meet sarla...she back hugged her...and wished her good morning...

sarla : haye meri bachi...aaj sunday hai aur itna jaldi ready bhi hogayi...aaj suraj kaha say uga??

preeta : waisa nahi hai maa..woh

sarla : preeta...jo bolna hai....bolo beta...agar tum kahogi...woh tumhareliyea sahi lagta hai toh darne ki kya baat??

preeta : aapko kaisay pata chala?

sarla : mein tumhari maa hoon...tumhare rag rag se waqiff hoon....tumhare aahat say pata chal jata hai....ab bolo bhi do...

preeta:wohmaameinkarankebaaremeinkehnachahtihoonmujheaapkimadadchahiyeawohappjaisasochtihainwaisanahihaimeinapnebajarbattukoacchesayjaantihoonpleaseussayekchancedijiyea...

preeta said in a flow....fully tensed...

sarla : preeta ruko.....itna kyu gabararahi ho...saans lo..bacchi....haa abh batao..

preeta :woh...maa mein karan ke baare mein kehna chahti hoon mujhe aapki madad chahiyea woh app jaisa sochti hain waisa nahi hai mein apne bajarbattu ko  acche say jaanti hoon please ussay ek chance dijiyea...

sarla just gestured her to continue....while now preeta seeing sarla's calm face started to feel some what normal....she told everything written in the diary except karan's desire to kiss her and her doubts...later looked at sarla with a hope.....her eyes started to brim and she tightly hugged sarla and started sobbing in her arms while she murmured...

preeta : please ma...mera yakeen kijiyea...mujhe pata hai....aapko woh accha nahi lagta fir bhi woh mera bachpan ka dost hai...mein ussay jaanti hoon....mujhe bhi laga ki woh badal gaya hai...lekin nahi maa...ussay badala gaya hai...abhi bhi mujhe mere bajarbattu pe vishwaas hai ma....aap ek baar mera yakeen kijiyea...ussay ek mauka dijiyea...mein rakhi aunty ko bhi apna maa maanti hoon ma...unhe aap thik kar sakti hain...mere liye kardijiye na ma...

sarla : sho...mera bacha...dekho main hoon na...mein tumhare saath hoon....mujhe karan se koi shikayat nahi hai.....bas ek baar shrishty kuch keh rahi thi aur maine aisay hi bol diya...bhala abh tum bol rahi ho...toh mein bhi tumhare saath hoon....abh rona band karo...abh mein kuch bhi karoongi...tumhare rakhi aunty ko bhi bilkul theek kardoongi....aakhir yea mera kaam hai beta....mein aaj hi karan ke papa se milti hoon...aur tumhe ek surprise bhi milega....

preeta wiped her tears and hugged her once again...

preeta : thankyou mom....mein aapse yahi kehney keliye dar rahi thi....mein bhi aapsay wada karoongi ki iss sabhi problems ka ittu sa bhi assar mere padhai mein nahi padega....mein aapka sapna bhi poora karoongi....

shrishty who just came down after feshening up....saw them and started her blabbering...

shrishty : haayo rabba.....yeah mein kya dekh rahi hoon....hey bhagwan mujhe aapke pass utha kyu nahi lete....hadh hoti hai....meri toh yaha koi zikr hi nahi hai....maa kya mein aapke hi beti hoon yaa mein kahi kue mein nadi mein behti hui aayi aur aapne mujhe god leliya.....

sarla : chal nautanki...pagal hogayi hai kya??chal aaja....

all the trio share a cute family hug and spent some time then sarla left to meet karan's mahesh...she reached the office and the receptionist told her to wait for sometime later she was called in...

mahesh : yes...come in...aap kon hai

sarla : ji  namaste... i am dr.sarla arora....preeta ki mom....

mahesh : namaste...myself mahesh lutra...par aap preeta ki mom...kuch samjha nahi...

sarla :  mein preeta ki maasi hoon...maga woh abh meri beti hai...aur abh mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai...izasat hai??

mahesh : zaroor...sunkar khushi hui...mein bhi preeta ko apna beti maanta hoon...aapko kya bolna hai??bejijq boliyea...kya preeta say kuch sambandith..

sarla : jee nahi..as i said mein ek doctor hoon...to be specific ek neurologist....so kya mein rakhi ji ka case handle kar sakthi hoon...aap mera profile check karlijiyea....balki doosri baat yea hai ki preeta rakhi ji ko apna maa maanti hai...aur karan preeta ka bahut accha dost bhi hai...toh preeta chahti hai ki mein yea case personally handle karoon aur to be honest aapse milne ke pehle meiney unka poora case study kia and from my experience abhi tak unhe theek hojana chahiyea tha...

mahesh : aap yea jo bhi keh rahi hai...par abhi tak meri rakhi ji theek tho nahi hue hain...

sarla : hum bhi aapko wahi samjhana chahte hain mr. lutra....mujhe lagta hai ki unke treatments mein kahi toh galti hai...shayadh unhe abhi bhi oh medicines continue kia jaa rahe hai...

mahesh : aap jo bhi keh rahi hain...mein kuch nahi samajhna chahta.....mein aap par poora vishwaas karta hoon...jab aapney preeta ko apni beti bola...tabhi mein aappar wishwaas kar chuka hoon....mujhe bas meri rakhi ji lauta dijiyea....mein aapse vinnati karta hoon....uske bina humara parivaar adhoora hai....mein in paiso ka koi lihaaz nahi rakhta...jitana karch karna hai kijiyea....bas meri rakhi ji ko sahi salamat lauta dijiyea....please...

sarla : dekhiyea mr luthra....mein aapki dard samaj sakti hoon aur mein aapko waada karti hoon ki mein rakhi ji ko sahi salamat aapke pass lautaungi...bas aapko mera saath dena chahiyea...

mahesh : mein karunga...bas kahiyea....

sarla : jaisay meiney kaha koi toh hai jo chahta hai ki rakhi ji theek na ho...toh agar hum unhe hospital mein bhi shift karde toh bhi chances hain ki yea firsay duaraya jaa sakta hain...isliye mein rakhi ji ko apne ghar mein hi treatment dena chahti hoon....

mahesh : par karan.....aur aapko bhi yea takleef hoga....

sarla : jee nahi....mein apni beti ki khushi chahti hoon....bhaiya<preeta's father> ke jaane ke baadh preeta bahut badal gayi...bahut mushkil tha ussay sambhalna...bilkul chup hogayi...apne saare bhaavnao ko chupane lag gayi...par aaj fir meiney ussay rote dekha bilkul vaisay jab bhaiya guzar gaye the...aap bas haa keh dijiyea..

mahesh : aap itna kehrahi hain toh....mein aapke saath do nurses ko bhi laga doonga....aapke absence mein oh rahengi...

sarla : uski zaroorat nahi hain....mere ghar mein meri maa aur meri behan janki rehti hain....oh sambhal lenge...aap jab chahiye tab aake mil sakte hain...

mahesh : mein nahi jaanta mein aapka kaisay shukriya kahu....

sarla : mujhe aapse aur ek baat bhi kehna hai....

mahesh : jii kahiyea!!

sarla : woh mujhe nahi pata aapko yea sunkar kaisay lagega magar yahi hakeekat hai......jaisay meiney kaha rakhi jee ko koi toh maarney ka koshish kar raha hai...ussy tarah aapke bete karan ko bhi koi mood alternating narcotic pills diyea jaa rahe hain....

mahesh : yea aap kya keh rahe ho?? aapko aisa kyu lagta hai....

sarla : yeh shayadh tabsey ho raha hai jabsay rakhiji ka tabiyath kharab hua hai..aur abh uska asar aur bhi strong hote jaa raha hai....

mahesh : mein kuch samajh nahi pa raha....meiney kisi ka kuch nahi bigada.....toh kyu...yea kaun hai jo mujhe aur mere pure parivaar ko mitane ke shadyantr racharaha hai...

sarla : dekhiyea woh jaana aapka zimmedari hai....abh aur 2 mahino mein in logo ka summer holidays bhi shuru hone wala hai aur mein aapko waada karti hoon unke summer holidays khatam hone wakt rakhi ji sudharjayengi....aur karan ko bhi aap hamare ghar bhej dijiyea...abh bacche saath mein padhenge...aur preeta bhi karan ke saath rahengi toh...woh bhi sudhar jayega....humare ghar aisa toh nahi hoga..aur rakhi ji hain toh aapko wajah bhi mil gayi...bas yea bhi maanjayiye....

mahesh : ji mujhe yea manzoor hai..mein aapar barosa karta hoon....aayiye abhi hi hum rakhi shift karvadenge aur karan ko mein samjadoonga....

both reached luthra masion ans shifted rakhi to arora house...later sarla went while mahesh assured her that he would drop karan after packing his clothes....otherside karan was super exited to be with his babydoll in the same house...he couldn't control his excitement while mahesh had happy tears in his eyes seeing karan that much happy after so many months...he actually found his lost hope of getting his family back after seeing his excitements...while karan atlast hugged him tightly and went to his room....

#with karan#

he was happy!!!finally now he got a hope that his mother would be back....because now his babydoll was with him...

(karan's pov)

aww...love you babydoll.....tum ek dum jaadoo ho yaar...pata nahi abh sach me babydoll mujhe lagta hai ki mumma theek ho jayengi...aur hum saare ek saath woh bi 5 ahiney le saktey hain...woh....

(end of pov)

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#other side with preeta#

preeta was tensed as sarla didn't call her or return home from morning....but she informed her to clean two guest rooms....later shrishti came and tapped her...

shrishty : arey kya yaar...toh bhi subah say dukhi aatma bankar batak rahi hai...subah bhi meiney kuch nahi suna aur abh tujhse poocha  toh bhi kuch nahi bol rahi hai...maa tumhe kya suprise dene wali hai yea sochkar mein pagal hoye jaa rahi hoon khushi ke maare aur tum!! arey meri maa hosh mein avo....hey bhagwan aaj iss dukhi aatma ko kya hua....subah se aisay kyu hai 

while preeta made a annoying face....

preeta : ayee ....chup...bilkul chup...abh maa ne guest rooms ready karne kaha woh kaam hogaya...naani aur janki maasi ney khana bhi bana liya par abh tak yea samajh nahi aaraha hai ki kaun aaraha hai...bas wahi soch rahi thi...

at that time sarla came and called everyone to the hall....everyone came and stood...while sarla smiled at sarla....preeta gave a confused look and sarla moved aside....rakhi was sitting in the wheelchair...preeta's eyes automatically welled up....she ran and cupped rakhi's face...

preeta : rakhi aunty...aap yaha....mein preeta...aapki preeta..dekhiyea meri taraf....

sarla stroked preeta's hairs and smiled at her....she assured her that rakhi would be fine....preeta stood and hugged sarla.....then sarla told preeta to take rakhi towards the guest room and explained janki and ro dadi everything.....shrishti also helped preeta to make rakhi aunty comfortable....later both came back assuring rakhi was settled...

sarla : preeta...tu abh khush hei na beta...mein pakka rakhi jii ko theek kar doongi.....

preeta just nodded with tears....

sarla : arey yea mera surprise nahi tha...woh toh badhmein milega....iskeliyea itna fir tab kya karogi?? mat ro beta...kuch nahi hoga mein hoon na....bas mera baccha...jao thoda der rakhi jii ke saath rehlo...fir khana khayenge sab milkar...

just at that time rishab entered and greeted everyone....later he took preeta saying that he had to clear some doubts in maths and physics....

#with rishta#

rishab : oye preetu...mein kuch nahi samajh paya yaar....pata nahi agla hafte test mein mein tho flunk ho jaunga...madad kardo na please.....

preeta : arey ha!!!chalo dikhao kya hai....mein sikhati hoon...

rishab and preeta together solved some of the sums important for test while...while shristi was busy playing game in her room....karan reached arora house , bid bye to ahesh and entered inside....he greeted everyone and later told sarla that he would meet preeta and give her a surprise.....karan silently went towards preeta's room....but saw both rishab and preeta sitting together on the bed and preeta was busily talking to rishab without even glancing at the room...he silently went to the guest room and settled there....later rishab left to his home...and preeta came down....seeing her normal she understood that karan didn't meet her still and informed her that someone was waiting for her in the guestroom and handed her dinner and informed that ro dadi had to take her medicines hence they all had their dinner while shrishti told she was full...

otherside karan was very irritated and angry....he was very excited to stay with his babydoll , thinking he would get some time to spend and talk with her...apologise to her...he had many thoughts , he wanted to give her a surprise but rather he got a shock...but the moment he saw her with rishab he felt like if he stands there even for a minute he would end up punching rishab's face...thus he left from there....he just wanted to take out all his frustrations...he doesn't know what it is but simply he is super angry when he see's his babydoll with someone even sameer...and he accepts it openly that HE IS POSSESSIVE ABOUT HIS BABYDOLL...AND HE WOULDN'T LET ANYONE BETWEEN THEM...

though preeta was confused she just moved towards the guest room to see who it was that her mother was so sure....that the person would make her happy!!

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@sakshi028  abh mene update kardiya....agla part full preeran hoga...meri fav. zindagi update kardo...and pakka kal kardiya toh kal hi iska update mil jayega...abh tumhari marzii...

@Preeran_love extra martial affair update kardo....mein bhi yeah update kardoongi...

abh aur kya...cutie pie update kardiya abhi batao kaisa hai...and sorry pehle hi agar bakwas nikala toh...
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