Part 2 yeah. I know my books are lame but... Yeah, still ranting about other people's.

5) No emotion.

The characters show no emotion. Literally. Example:

Cameron's POV

Oh no, my sister died. I'm so sad. I'm gonna die. NU.

6) too much emotion.

Exaggeration of uh... Everything. Example:

"WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?" She screamed. "NO WAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"YUSSSSSSSSS." He said. "I AM AN ALIEN! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IIII WILLL MURDERRRRR YOUUUUUUUUUU...."

calm down bruh. ✋ "?!", "??", "!!", "?!?" and "!?!" Are okay for me but....

7) Characters never go to the bathroom.

Am I the only one bothered by this XD? Like, the characters never go to the bathroom. Do they hold their pee until the book ends or something?!

"Hey, Rose, don't you need to go to the bathroom?"

"Wait a sec, gotta wait till the 273664738 stories in which I'm starring right now finish."

"k"

That's all for now.~