19) punctuation.

" Mom , hi.hello ? " I tried calling mom,but she's not answering either . What do I do now?where is she ? I don't know , hm.ill keep looking

20) disguises.

Ugly nerd is actually pretty:

BadBoy: *points at ugly nerd* OMG she's so ugly lol

Nerd: *takes off glasses*

Badboy: //gasp WHAT

Everyone: //gasp OMG YOURE SO PRETTY GO OUT WITH ME?

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Model in disguise as a boy:

Once upon a time there was a model. She so nice. She no want none to now about she beein model. So she put on glasses. She no wear makeup. She put on wig. She go to boyschool. She some how change voice to no high pitch. But , bad boy discovers she no boy. "U NO BOY" says Baddy. "I AM BOY" says model. "NO U NO BOY" says Baddy. Then Baddy grab hair and take off wig and she is oh so pretty and oh so cool and oh so a girl. She gasp. He gasp. Everyone faint she so pretty and baddy marries her now.

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Can we not?

21) author's note every other paragraph. A/N: ikr•

Hello there my name is Jime.

(A/N: JUST LIKE YOU Fairy_Hunter12 OMG LOL)

I like to draw.

(A/N: lol XsmileforeternityX same as you CXXX)

I'm depressed n going to die.

I'm blonde and my green orbs resemble the horizon of Mexican fields in summer.

(A/N: well I have a friend she's called @dylasilagui and this is so like her omg!!)

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So basically you're sharing your life story with us through author notes. Okay then.

22) BEEP BEEP

I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock. Yes, it's already 6:55, I said to myself as I turned my alarm off. Today will be a great day.

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"SHUT UP!" I yelled to my alarm clock as I turned it off. I got up and took a shower. Let's go to school.