17) Hairstyles and Descriptions (Hobbies and stuff)

When your hair HAS to be on a messy bun.

Bun gotta be messy yah?

Anyways, character description.

"Hi guys. My name is Sophie Rose, I live in The United States of Asia. My hair is blonde, it's curvy, and everyone says it's pretty. I always tie it on a messy bun. And although every one likes my hair, I think it's horrible. My eyes are ocean blue, everyone wants eyes like mine, who wouldn't want my eyes, they're perfect!! But, I don't like my eyes that much. I always wear makeup, everyone says it fits me, but I know it doesn't. I know I'm one of the prettiest girls in school, I'm a honor roll student, I'm popular, I have lots of friends, so basically everyone loves me. My hobbies are partying and destroying other people's lives. But, I despite hypocrites and have very low self esteem."

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Okie den.

18) Parents?

Where are the parents. The parents are never there. Hello? Parents. Your child's here getting involved in stuff, please notice.

Example:

Marie's POV

In the middle of the night, I turned on all the lights, turned on the radio non FULL VOLUME, and started shouting lyrics of my favourite song. Of course, my messy bun was messier than usual, but I didn't care. After that I decided to escape the house and returned three years later."

y u no care mom and dad?