15) "The Adventures of..."

Idk if its just me, but I seriously hate when a book is called "the Adventures of..."

"The Adventures of Rose Rosen with her bf Brandon Braces and The Hidden Palace Under The Red Big Bridge"

Oh yeah that's so original.

"The Adventures of Martina"

"The Adventures of a Random Dog"

"The Adventures of Alien Boy: Aliens Nearby"

It would be better if you put only "Aliens Nearby", or idek.

"The Adventures of" sounds like a school reading book you are forced to buy because yay gotta read it at school. And do a reader's response. XD

16) copying.

A/N: so uhm hello people. This is my new book called "the bad-boy and the good-girl". My inspiration came from this book called "the bad-boy and the shy-girl", but of course mine is an original idea.

You sure?

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Sorry if this was short. I try. Jk it takes me like 5min and a brain full of random ideas to do each chapter. But I can only write when my brain feels like it. I can be like "I'm thirsty" for a second and on the next moment "what if giant earth cookies collapsed in Mars and made it fly into Jupiter causing Venus to turn to milk? Nah, to expensive. Lol a circle."