10) POV (Point Of View).

When there are 29336228374 different point of views in a single chapter.

Rose's POV

Ana called me ugly. I wonder if she hates me.

Ana's POV

HA. I called her ugly. Maybe she's suspecting if I hate her by now.

Brandon's POV

What's wrong with this girls, calling each other ugly. "You're so dumb." I said.

Rose's POV

Brandon called me dumb.

Ana's POV

Did he just call me dumb?!

11) No comas or periods.

So Jamie and I went to the park and we had so much fun because it was like awesome and we ate hot dogs because hot dogs are fab then we went to the amusement park and it was really nice and the kids were super Happy and that made us Happy too because Happy kids equal smiles and smiles equal Happy kids.

Bruh, calm the fluff down.

12) suicide.

There are at least 28374739219 suicide books out there. And all of them are like:

I hate the world. The world hates me. I want to die. They want me to die. Let's do a world a favor and kill myself.

.... Uhm k den.