010.
Cliché #10: crazy and unnecessary POV changes
Jack's POV
I stared at her
Nicole's POV
I stared back at him
Neighbor's POV
I stared at them staring at each other
Trust me, we readers do not need to know the thoughts of all of your characters for one particular scene lol
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