The Raven In My Apartment - By regular-human-being

This book is interesting as hell, as I read the summary the hook of the story got my attention! Let's get into the review.

Story: As I said, an interesting premise. Does it live up to it's premise? My answer is yes! No spoilers here, you must see for yourself! 50/50

Characters: Your characters are almost real! I felt like I was walking in their shoes the whole time. They are well fleshed out and I can relate to them! 30/30

Grammar/Punctuation: What you did with some of the wording is clever and unique, your Punctuation was great and there were no misspellings of any kind. Although, I would try to separate some of the dialogue from the narration, but that is a small issue.
19/20

Final Score: 99
Final Grade: A+

Your story deserves more reads! Just keep promoting it!

Thank you for reading and I will see you soon!

Peace and Love