The Babysitter
The Babysitter is written by OOIridescenceOO, let's dive into some scary things!
Story: Man! I probably won't be sleeping tonight! This story unsettled me in the best way possible and that is what good horror does to a reader! 50/50
Characters: Your characters feel genuine and real, despite the fact that there are some supernatural elements going on. Their reactions feel real and I love that! 30/30
Grammar/Punctuation: A few mistakes here, but nothing monumental, this was a very scary good time and it was easy to follow! 19/20
Final Score: 99/100
Final Grade: A+
Be sure to check this book out guys and give OOIridescenceOO a follow! This a future author in the making!
Thank you for reading and I will see you soon!
Peace and Love
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