I love a good science fiction story and this one piqued my intrest. This story comes from TheEqualizer and it is very unique. So let's get into the review!

Story: This is a very interesting story, although I only read three Chapters, I got a sense of the story and I can't wait to read the rest. 50/50

Characters: Your characters were great and I love the addition of Reptile in this story! I think it adds an element to this book. 30/30

Grammar/Punctuation: Your grammar has a few problems, but nothing big. Also I would separate the dialogues from the narration paragraphs so others can read it easier. 17/20

Your final score: 97/100. Your book gets an A+!

Just tweak up the things I pointed out and keep promoting this story! It deserves more reads!

Thank you for reading and I will see you soon!

Peace and Love