This book is written by Heatheranno, let's jump right in guys.

Story: This a great adventure concept! The action is well written and your characters are well fleshed out! 50/50

Characters: As I said before, your characters have layers to them that really caught my attention. The key to a great story is great characters! Amazing work! 30/30

Grammar/Punctuation: No problems here, it looks like this was carefully edited. 20/20

Final Score: 100/100
Final Grade: A+

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