Smoke
OC by Degal_Heartfang
Hey Degal? I'm sorry this took so long, I completely forgot about this book and I apologize. Anyway, I'll do the ArcticWings next, then @Leo-pad's fantribe, the TigerWings. Again, sorry for the delay!
And happy (belated) Jobokaflód!
Name: Smoke, name he gave himself, his real name was Blitz
Cool
Gender: Male
Noice
Age: 17
Coolsies
Tribe: SkyWing, but others get him mixed up with a NightWing from his colors
That's why he's a misfit, I assume? Or why he's considered a 'freak'
Sexuality: Questioning it (Heterosexual, Heteromantic) though he liked boys once, but didn't like it
Okee.
Looks: Smoke is a huge charcoal colored SkyWing with eyes that are the color of smoke, his body is littered with burns from his own powers and has scars along his face, backside of his neck, shoulders, and sides. His right horn is broken in half from Condor when he was much younger. He isn't that muscular, but isn't lean or skinny by anymeans. His underscales are a copper-ish color, and has slightly smaller wings then most SkyWings. If you were to look into his mouth, you would smell a very strong scent of smoke and see smoke already escaping the moment he opens his mouth, seeing as his scales can't release the smoke.
I can picture him clearly, and he sound magnificent!
Abilities: Blue fire, claws, fast flier, PTSD makes him extra strong if he's in a tough situation at times, aka adrenaline. Can make himself catch on fire by will, but hardly ever uses it cause it hurts him, but it releases the smoke in his body.
The only part I'd change is the part about blue fire. I suppose it makes a sort-of sense, but I don't feel like it fits with the Wings of Fire universe. Just a suggestion though.
Personality: Smoke is very... introverted, he tries not to talk a lot to people, or trust people a lot thanks to Condor's experiments. He may seem like an emo to some, and to be frank, he is. He is very off putting to some, and only a handful actual earn a place in his heart, like Grey and Dusk, even then, he doesn't really trust them. He does have issues, in 'We, the Freaks: Char's Sins' Smoke is described by Char as a dragon who just wants to dissappear from the world, so no one can worry about him anymore. (We, the Freaks: Char's Sins, will hopefully come out only a year after We, the Freaks: Trickle's Legacy, seeing as Mist's book comes next)
This makes sense
Queen They Support: None
Makes sense
Family
Father: Gold - a red SkyWing with orange underscales and wings, has yellow eyes
Mother: Burgundy - a slightly darker reddish orange dragoness with large wings, has amber eyes.
Brother: Char - A rustic red SkyWing with tender yellowish pink scales on his underbelly, chest, neck. Has a sort of lava like shine under his scales that sometimes bubble and pop releasing smoke, painful. Has red tinted brown eyes, Triple Firescales.
Sister: Red - red dragoness with golden eyes and underscales, has a sweet smile. Alive and well. (Only mentioned in We, the Freaks: Char's Sins)
Cool names
Friends
Dusk - a pale yellow SandWing with a tribal black marking around his eyes, has a dark colored barb and sail. Has indigo/blue eyes. Best friend, but doesn't trust him with his life. Nut job and a half.
Grey - pale grey NightWing/IceWing with blind eyes and not pattern under his wings. Has a little Frost powers, but just enough to make you want to wear a coat or blanket. Doesn't have future sight, mind reading, or fire. Just a little bit of frost, that's all. Friend, he guesses.
Both Dusk and Grey are interesting characters, and I love their names.
Likes: Dusk, Grey, flying, the quietness, that's about it besides the fact he likes scrolls and fighting
Dislikes: His parents, brother, Condor, himself ("Whatever Condor did to me, is never right, a dragon with four times the fire, should never live." - Smoke), his fire, his coughing fits, talking.
Residence: Hidden in the Claws of the Clouds mountains with Grey and Dusk in a place they call simple call 'The Phantom's Canvern' a slightly large cave with diffrent rooms for them all.
Job: None
Mate: Isn't interested in one
Dragonets: Doesn't want to curse innocent ones with his powers
Crush: Doesn't have one, Grey likes him though
Strengths: Flying, fighting, his set-on-fire ability, his blue fire
Weakness: His introvert nature, doesn't open up to others, hunting, to quiet for his own good. Bad temper.
Backstory: Before he hatched, Condor asked for her royal scientist to conduct experiments to multiple eggs, to make the 'prefect dragon' one of the any things she always wanted in her kingdom (Fun fact: Mist was also part of this, but in the future, giving him his fire and frost scales). She forced his parents to give his egg up, saying if they didn't, she would send her guards after them, and to kill them both. Knowing they couldn't risk each other's lives, Burgundy and Gold gave them his egg.
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Just making a note here. Who's the current Queen? If it was Ruby, this wouldn't happen. It probably would take multiple generations of SkyWing Queens before one became evil enough to let this happen.—
His eggs was ejected with the blood of firescaled SkyWings, until his egg almost became black in color from his new fire abilities. Do to this, when he hatched, he was so small, when he wailed smoke erupted from his mouth, and his scales were melted and turn into the color of charcoal. His parents were horrified, and thought he would die, but the scientist explained this was to be expected, 'the side effects of the fireblood' he explained.
Gold and Burgundy understood this, but were scared of him, and his ungodly ability to set himself of fire, but what made them even more scared, was that he had blue fire.
At a young age, he knew that his parents were scared of him, and once he was two, he ran away. He didn't want them to be horrified of him and his freakish powers. However he was caught by Condor's guards, and was thrown to the talons of Condor.
He was severely punish, to where Condor through she killed him, and ordered her guards to thrown him off the mountain to make sure.
What they didn't know, was Blitz was still alive, and woke up before he crash, and was able to somewhat soften his landing but was still hurt.
He knew he couldn't go back, and made sure they thought he was dead just in case. He knew that the SkyWing cemetery was close, and drug one of the bodies to the place he feel at, covered it with soot he made, and ran away.
He became to steal food, and other things, and found shelter in an old house in Possibility. One day, he went to try to steal a small peice of jewelry from a SandWing, but the SandWing's 'brother' saw him, and attacked, bring him to the SandWing he stole from.
The larger SandWing congratulated him for stealing from him, saying it was never done before, but soon orders for Blitz to be take back to his father.
One the way there, Blitz learned that they were apart of a religious group called 'The King's Servants' and learned that the one he tried to steal from was the leader's son, Tumbleweed.
The quote on quote 'brother' of Tumbleweed was named Dusk. Seeing as Blitz didn't really have a choice, and he was weak from going without much food.
Tumbleweed dragged him to the Scorpion's Den, to his father, Cacti, and began to tell him he stole from him, and wanted him punished. Cacti ordered for Blitz to tell his name, but he refused, trying to explain he couldn't talk or else smoke will come out with talon gestures.
Cacti grew angry and went to attack Blitz, but Dusk stood up for him, coming in between them, coming up with a lie that he couldn't speak.
Cacti then understood and ordered for him to be thrown into the prison, when Dusk visited him regularly. Dusk finally got Blitz to speak, but Blitz told him his name was Smoke, to hide his real name incase Condor came here.
Smoke and Dusk very slowly became friends, and then word came around a possible gang war, Dusk let Smoke out, saying that in the fighting, no one would notice them leaving.
When the gangs began to fight, they took off, Smoke reviling his ungodly ability to set himself on fire, to get them through at least five SandWings.
Because of the burns afterward, Smoke grew weaker, and Dusk had to help him steer himself to the old NightWing Kingdom (it's finally livable now) away from the fighting. They crash landed into the boarder, meeting a NightWing named Dryeyes (This is before Trickle meets him), who had the powers to temporarily take away powers from dragons like Scales Shifting, Fire breathing, or Frostbreath.
Dryeyes let them stay in his home for a few days until Smoke was ready to go, while they stayed there, they met a smaller blind NightWing/IceWing hybrid named Grey. Smoke didn't really like him at first, cause he was all touchy-feely and Smoke hated physical contact, then again he was blind.
When Smoke thought it was time for them to go, Grey insisted on coming with them, and ignored Smoke's hints on want him to stay here and to leave him alone. When they took of, Grey somehow followed them, who he did. Smoke could never find out, but he knew he couldn't just throw Grey back into the air because he could get hurt.
They found a relatively small cave for them to live in, with Smoke choosing one of the room farthest away from them, from his tendency to accidentally set himself on fire in his sleep (he wakes up immediately afterwards due to pain) and didn't want to hurt them. No matter how annoying Grey is.
After at least two years with them, Smoke slowly grew to appreciate the small hybrid and explained to him the world around him, telling him the colors of the world around Grey. Slowly over time, Dusk began to become crazy, and after a year, Smoke found out why.
Cacti was using a Dreamvistor to punish him, slowly making Dusk lose his mind, telling him he was a mistake, and that he would be rewarded if he killed Smoke and comeback. Smoke found this out when Dusk did try to kill him, but once Smoke attacked him with his claws, did Dusk somewhat snap out of it, apologizing for trying to kill him.
Smoke from them on watched Dusk closely, to make sure he won't try anything funny. One day as he flying around to stretch his wings, Smoke saw Char, who he didn't know was his brother, thinking he was a guard, Smoke began to fly away, before Char noticed him and followed after him. Smoke lost him in he mountains, flying and zigzaging through them, and hid in a cave to make sure.
About a week or two after that, Smoke met him again after a fight between Char and Condor and Snowstorm's new plaything (another experiment named Bark, a MudWing/SkyWing who was immune to fire), and reluctantly drug him back home.
Smoke learned Char was his brother, and even had a sister named Red, but he explained Red was killed by Bark accidentally when he and her were fighting. Smoke kept quiet the entire time Char was there, secretly gain info on him incase they had to fight in the near future (a common thing he did was to always gather info), and learned about the Second Chance Cavern, a place where hybrids, freaks, and much more could live in peace with one another.
Smoke didn't really feel interested in that, and thought to himself he rather stay with Dusk and Grey then with dragons he didn't know.
A few years after, while Smoke and his denmates were stretching their wings, SkyWing guards found them, and captured him, putting fire proof braced on him, and hauled him to Condor.
Condor was impressed he was still alive, surprised even, but she smiled once she saw his broken horn and scar across his face. She ordered to dump water on him, then to take off his muzzle. Finally able to speak, Smoke asked why she was making so many experiments, with his reply being: "Every Queen has subjects, but imagine a kingdom of prefect dragons, invincible and their Queen, being me, but more... invincible. You were just an experiment gone wrong, along with your brother and that SkyWing and IceWing hybrid with the fire and frost scales."
Smoke knew what she was saying was right, and offered a suggestion. If he could show he wasn't a failed experiment, she'd leave them alone, if not, she could kill him, and his friends.
Condor agreed, and they fought for what felt like ages, Smoke was almost killed by Condor, but they were stopped by Trickle and his group: Char, Sap, and Mist.
Trickle said to stop, and when Condor went to kill him, Sap electrocuted he, soon to whine about his severely burned palms. Smoke asked why they were here, Trickle said that their visioner, Dreamgazer, saw that he needed help, and came.
Smoke pushed them aside and checked on Dusk and Grey, casting a thank you to them, and they went home. Grey complained that they should have joined them as a thank you as well, and Smoke said pledging allegations to a dragon they didn't know could only lead to trouble, even through he secretly wanted to, be he would never admit that to them.
Now, Smoke tries to help his friends, and spends his days trying to find the Second Chance Cavern, and to join his brother.
Other: Smoke will be in 'We, the Freaks: Smoke's Story' where a new story will be unfolding. Yes, I know, I mentioned a lot of diffrent books, but me and my friends already them planned out, and in order.
Cool. I'm excited. :)
Other: Just an update on the Dragonets thing. He later adopts two RainWing orphans named Drizzle (male) and Bluebell (female), they'll sort of be mains in Smoke's Story.
Drizzle - a shy little dragonet with, normally, light blue scales and a yellow frill. Has brown eyes.
Beautiful! And I love the name.
Bluebell - the opposite of her brother and is wide open, loves having attention and stands up for her brother. Normally bright greens and yellows, with blue eyes.
She sounds adorable.
Okay then! I really like Smoke, he's an interesting character.
I give him a 9/10
Why?
—Blue Fire (-.5)
—The Queen letting Condor experiment(-.5)
Okay then! And again, I'm truly sorry this took so long.
Anyway, Merry Christmas, Happy Hanukah, Happy Jobokaflód, or whatever else you all celebrate!
See you soon!
~Tewofuru
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